o_0! omg! what happens next? i MUST know! plz oh plz update again soon!

Yay! I'm so excited. Keep writing! I want to know what happens. Again, you're a great writer, keep it up! You've inspired me to add my own V/R story, so thanks and all! My only critique would be maybe pacing...i liked the very thoughtful aspect of the previous story, but it could just be cuz this one was so action-packed. And i am definitely looking forward to the sequel! Yay again!

Oh gosh, where to start . . .
First of all, fantastic story. Hm, I love it. I mean the words just flow and the dialogue, man! It's just so good. I can hear them talking in my head, Hell, I can see the scenes in my head. I can hear the sounds of the storm and the crashing of the sea. It's that good.
But also, the way you so subtlety put those little quirks and aspects of their relationship thats so . . . so deeply ingrained in them. The whole reflex thing of saving one another and it just being so deeply meshed into their patterns of being partners and friends that even in the fury and fear of something like that they do it like second instinct.
And I know, those idiots at WB need to clue in and stop pushing Rich into the background and as you said disparage him.
Not to mention that V really needs to figure it out. After all Richie already has figured it out, but he won't take that final step. Oh well, I'm sure you'll beat it in his head somehow, or at least I hope you do.
Anyway, can't wait to read the next part. Bye!

This is great so far. Please update soon. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. :)