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Lw117149 5/21/12 . chapter 5
very sweet.*S*
RemySevvyFan 5/5/12 . chapter 5
Wow, this ending is very abrupt!

And Sirius is more important than Remus here, so why are the characters of this ff Remus L. & Harry P.?

But I liked the story! You're good at writing!
LunaBeth203 4/29/12 . chapter 5
love it
Sharon T 4/14/12 . chapter 5
Hood story wish it was longer:)
LenleG 4/9/12 . chapter 5
Just loved this! One of the better stories I've ever read... and I've really read far too many XD

Thanks for writing! Great stuff. :)
SafaiaFureia 3/18/12 . chapter 5
Only one complaint, you dont say HOW he cleared his name. Did they go hunt Peter Pettigrew? Did he use that bowl for memories and use his own memories of the incident to clear his name? What?

Beyond that I like how you did it :D Once again, a wonderful story that was beautifully written.
Sabrina-Rie 3/18/12 . chapter 5
Awwwww... This was such a great story! I love the plot line! This is the first story I've read where Sirius comes back alive and I quite enjoyed it.
Lady Elena Bella Petrova 3/14/12 . chapter 5
Love this chapter and story so far! hoping to read more later!
JlovesGaara 2/23/12 . chapter 5
Such a fabulous story! Very powerful and moving. You did a great job writing this!
JlovesGaara 2/23/12 . chapter 2
Wow, this is some heavy stuff. Very well written!
Angelic Abomination 2/13/12 . chapter 5
When I first started looking through this pairing I didn't expect to come across this Gem. I cried my eyes out. It is definitely getting favorited. You made everyone as real to me as JK does. From the very start to the bathroom scene to the extremely emotional kitchen scene and Snape's intervention, right up to the end. I have a lump in my throat even as I write now. Thankyou.
Angelic Abomination 2/13/12 . chapter 5
When I first started looking through this pairing I didn't expect to come across this Gem. I cried my eyes out. It is definitely getting favorited. You made everyone as real to me as JK does. From the very start to the bathroom scene to the extremely emotional kitchen scene and Snape's intervention, right up to the end. I have a lump in my throat even as I write now. Thankyou.
OneWorldLife 10/8/11 . chapter 1
I like how you made it more realistic by having Harry believe what the Dursleys tell him. I think that Sirius was cleared a bit to fast but it worked with the story so I won't say anything more about it.

Great job. :D

-One World
avalonchick5 9/16/11 . chapter 5
Hey!

I cried. A lot. Very emotional and realistic story, especially with the starvation and Harry's recovery. I've read a lot of stories that make that abuse a lot worse and make Harry recover really quickly, even though that's really not possible.

A well-written, dramatic, and heart-wrenching piece. Lovely.

Love,

Avalon
chucktastic 9/4/11 . chapter 2
I was literally cursing all the Order member particularly Remus and Albus to high heaven, while actually shaking with rage and dread for poor Harry...

Really great chapter, couldn't have stopped reading it even if I had wanted to, which I really really didn't.
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