Karl Marx's Communist Manifesto twisted in such a comedic fashion? Your writing is not quite as eloquent as his, although much cheerier and amateur.

I love this story! It is amazing! You are such a great writer!

so sad...

NO! Poor Lupin. When I realized what he was about to do. Oh man. I started crying. Good job. Really good job.

I love your story. This is so great. UGH. I want to drop kick those agents. SUCH JERKS. I wonder what the law is like in North America?

Guh. That was amazing! :D:D:D

-LunaSky

Augh, the angst! It's making me very sad. It probably doesn't help that: my allergies are acting up, I can't see out of one eye, my inner ear itches, and my throat itches.

_'

D

wow

Since I have absolutely nothing to do of my life, i as looking around on internet for... What was I looking? Dawn it. The important part, is that I've found a really cute image on about a fanfiction that the author said it was the best she had ever read, and putted a little description of the history.

There are absolutely not even one thing that I can say that it isn't... Wow!

Fantastic.

Absolutely Perfect.

But...

I had to print it all

Do you have any idea of the number of page's I've printed ?(stpupid question. Of course you have. You are the one that wrote the pages)

But it worthed. No doubt.

But my mother wants to kill you (hoho)

It's funny to write a comment in english.

Yes, i get happy easily, but that don't take away the merity of the comment, does it?

I hope not.

Keep writing, ya have the gift ;D

Hol-y crap. -whistles-

I was going around the other day and stumbled across a fan art for your story. It had a small description of your story and instantly, I was intrigued. Although I've read one Harry Potter (I'll read the rest once the fad dies down; I hate following the crowd), I found your story even better than J.K. Rowling's.

Amazing. This...is... You'd think that a person who hasn't read Harry Potter would be completely and utterly confused, but, strangely, I wasn't. The way you wrote it, I didn't even need to read the books to understand what was going on.

That, my dear, is a rare talent. 10 stars.

This was awesome, and this was just the first chapter. So much detail and all of the action! Your style is just amazing and I could see all of this happening! Poor Lupin... Gotta sympasize with him. I would be feeling and acting the same way if I was in the same situation(s). I am adding this as a favorite and I am going to be looking at other stuff you have written now. Keep writing!

Koki

Hi,

I've read your story months ago, so I can't remember the details very well.

I'm going to reread your story as soon as I can and submit a longer review in which I'll point out why I believe you did an amazing job.

It's such a complex story,with so strong topic in it. I was speechless for a moment after reading it.

The ending as touching it almost made me cry.

Well, that's just a brief overlook about why I adore this ff, I guess you'll hear of me again.

Until then

go on like that

moony (4ever)

Ps.: Sorry for any mistakes, I'm still learning English...

Oh my...oh my...wow. That was a very powerful ending...but good, very good. At times, it was addicting. I especially liked the ending- I found it ironic... I wonder- did he know about the necklace? Or was it just chance?

This is one of the best fanfictions I have ever read, I stayed up all night reading this - I was literally spellbound.

Thank you for writing this