I found the first chapter a bit confusing, got better after that. Wondering if it would have been Sharpner to find out who he is or Videl.
Very entertaining story.

interesting story. please continue it

I really like this! It's fun, and cute, and though Gohan seems a bit... odd, I'm enjoying this immensely. X3

Best of luck on the makings of the next chapter!

DAyum this is so good. You haven't updated in like 3-4 years though! LOL I think I read this before and reviewed anonomously...anyways...if you ever read this pleaase update this ASAP! :)

aw its cute update soon!

this is a good story i hope that it gets picked back up and finished.

PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY!

UPDate this, please, its just getting to the good part!

It's so sad that this was never finished... I mean, it was good. ( I'm disappointed. The grammar and spelling improved from chapter one to chapter six, too.

Also, the whole thing at the beginning with Videl fighting all those guys... reminded me of Ranma 1/2, lol.

Lmao, Videl is a little possessive, isn't she? Reminds me of myself, but where I work, that would start so many rumors... Ack... I mean, MORE rumors than I already have circulating about me. Heh.

This is such a cute story, goodness. D

Lmao, Sharpner cracks me up.

"Will you go out with me if I unmask Saiyaman?"

Hahahaha! Oh, yeah. This story is great, I repeat.

This story just cracks me up. So cute, and yet...not. I love it.

Gosh, it's good to see that not everyone hates Gohan as the GREAT SAIYAMAN! D I think it's hilariously awesome.

This was a really cute chapter.

First of all, I know this is old...like, three years old.

Second, I'm too lazy to correct anything (mostly because this is older).

Third, despite the grammar and spelling errors, I really enjoyed this first chapter. It's something different! The title and summary really drew me in. But the story itself wasn't really what I was expecting at all! And I mean that in a good way. It's cute, it's funny, and it's sweet. I like it.

And yes! Saiyaman! (Or...SaiyanMan!)

I just finished re-reading the story. Wow, it's been so long since you've updated. It been a little over 2 years.

...are you still alive? If you are please update soon. If you're not, may you rest in peace. Now, for a moment of silence...

-PsychoT