For some reason Ryou's nature in this fic really cheers me up ^^ The golden middle road, I guess...

Okay now, either there are some credits I havn't seen, or your in big trouble. Are you the same people/and or person who wrote this SAME STORY on Quizilla? Now if you are, forgive me, but if you aren't...

I know You haven't updated in a year or two... But i can still hope you will. It's the first Bakura and seto story i've ever read... And I like this pairing alot more thanI thought I would. I just wish you'd update so I know how it ends =]

Aa! Nani?!
Where's the yamis?!XD
I...should...NOT be reading this. BUT I AM. Darn age...xD
MORE SOON, EVIL YOU.>:/

That was adorably cute! I've never read a Kaiba/Barura fic before. You made it work. Like I always say, any pairing can work if the author is talented enough- and you have plenty of talent!! Good job.

I'm sorry, this reviewer can not be reached at this time. She has melted into an untidy pile of goo in her office chair because this story is so touching she can't help herself. Please leave a message after the beep... BEP!

Dear author - we urge you to share these feelings you write about in your story with your priest. It is not too late to repent! If we come together now we can help you see the error of your ways.

Nachzes: And it is cute, and adorable, and oh so swe~et! ^^

That was really good! Please write some more!
-has note card handed to her from off screen-
WHAT?! ONLY 38 REVIEWS?!! This fic is too good for that!
-evil smirk-
Don't worry, I'll... "persuade" some innocent bystanders to read >:}.
-insane evil laughter-
Write more soon! Well, got to go see a man about..."something".
Randome person: She means Malik.
-glares daggers-
Don't listen to them. They have tendency to show up in my writing.
Another random person: I thought you were gunna try out your new tourture rack today? You know, on the person who dared not read this fic? Or on Malik?
-looks clueless for a second-
Ops!
-blushes-
I kinda got carried away there! Well, anyways; good job! Keep up the good work! You have my support!

Really adorable ^^ I wanna read more... ;_;
I just wonder what happened to Yami Bakura XD Actually, to Yami Yuugi too...

[Note: this is a general review]
Hey girls! I wanted to tell you I love your website is so damn well done. And your fictiosn are amazing, not only I love them but I admire the way you write, it's simply unbelievable*!! The way you portrait the characters is unique, you make them easy to believe no matter what are their actions. (Honestly, who can actually make Yuugi a '**' and make it seem real?) I especially like how you do Kaiba, it's a writting I don't see much. My favorite fic is 'First Kiss', is extremly sweet and beautiful. And 'Triangle' is great, it was an idea I had been searching a lot and finely you knew how to do it right. 'Just look at me' is quite sad, but damn good anyway. The 'Better' one is also sweet. What else was I going to say? Well, using a 'companion fic' to call it so, like 'Closer to You' is something I had never seen before. Congratulations to you both for amazing stories and excellent writing skills, I am a huge fan of yours.

Amy

PS: I forgot to thank you, because thanks to you I learnt a bit more of Japanese.

I know there are two more chapters of this on yoru webpage...but when will Chapter 18 get posted? Either there or here, I'm not picky. I'd just really like to know what happens next. Please?

This is awesome. The characterizations are great, all of them but especially Kaiba and of course Ryou. And the lemons are lovely, just enough detail and not too much.
Please continue this!
By the way, you've accomplished the improbable: I'm loving a story that has no Yami Bakura! Nice job!

...where are you?!?!

:3 Hiya...I'm kinda new here and terribly lost and confuzzled...>_< I used to just read all the prettyful stories and think 'wow, that's good, maybe someday I'll write stories and stuff.' I actually did it. But, who cares about me, I think that your story is awesome! I wish I could be more contrcutive with my criticism, but, I'm hungry. ^^;; Eh-heh, gomenasai.
I love your story! Please write more! =^_^=