Not a bad story, a little weak on the details, but you do have my curiousity piqued about how this will continue.

what is going to happen to virgil's dad is he ok please write the next chapter soon please

You beter add new chapters forget about the fights Just what happened between Virgil and Sharon this is realy exciting so

FINNIISH

Lovin' it. Keep it comin'.

I love chapter 1 it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author. The names of the meta-breed are Ebon he is a walking shadow and he make vortics so he can travel. Shiv he makes purple light weapons. Talon she is a bird and has a powerful shriek. Kangor he has big feet and he can crush anything.

update or die

wow, you need help, lots of it. but that is a good thing because a sane person couldn't write something so funny!
this great, and please, please keep going!!

Yay! Update soon!

I love your story it was great. keep up the great work. You are a great author.

I really like this, update soon!

This is just so, ... so ... I am lost for words! I like this very much! you have to contuine, well I guess you dont have to do anything, except maybe breath, and eat, and watch Static Shock, other then that I guess you really don't have to do anything else.
Anyway, I would like it if you would contuine. This is very good.

Interesting... Very nice sex scene.

It seems like every damn rated R romance fic of SS it between Virgil and Richie...

O god. Richie wasn't behind the fake Sharon in some way, was he? AGH!

i will have a flash animated sequel to this story shortly

sequel teaser:if it wasn't sharon who srewd virgil...WHO WAS IT?
THIs vile porn will reveal himself..thats right "HIMSELF"
END OF TEASER

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I kind of feel that this story should go on a little longer. The reason is if Virgil didn't have sex with his sister then who did he have it with? Doing a part 2 to this story could help clear it up. This story started out as romance and ended in total mystery. I truly love a good twist to stories.

Awesome story! you should definately write a follow-up