woohoo! Finally! A good Faith/Wes story! Nice, very very nice!

Sex scenes ok but regarding Faiths background. Even twenty years ago a white female baby given up at birth would be extremely adoptable and more likely to have a Kennedy like lifestyle. Why on earth would she be in home for 19 years?

I really enjoyed this ficlet, it was great! I always thought it would be a cute idea for Faith and Wes to end up together, I'm thinking of writing a fic about them myself! Well I really enjoyed yours, good work! And also the final ep of Angel was aired here like 2 hours ago and I watched it so I'm all tear jerked on Wes dying =( he was one of my favourite. I think you captured the characters well here. Good job!

The dialogue needs work--it's too exposition-heavy and at times out of character. Here's a hint: if a line of dialogue isn't performing at least three functions (moving the plot, providing background, characterizing, &c.) cut it.

VERY VERY NICE! Faith and WES would make a really hot couple.

VERY VERY NICE! Faith and WES would make a really hot couple.

VERY VERY NICE! Faith and WES would make a really hot couple.

Hi. COOL! GREAT STORY!