 xanya-forever 2004-02-28 . chapter 1Hehehee, the blonde was Buffy, lovely twist. In fact, the whole last bit was a twist of the best nature. YOu know, cos of how you thought they weren't together, but then they were... I loved that idea! Cordy was so snarky and old-ish (as in, old Cordy rather than say, season four Cordy) and you made the entire fic pretty believable, though Angel was a little OOC in his shushing of her, and I don't think he would have led Buffy on quite as much. I loved it when Cordy called him a man... pire. You should definitely write more cos I really enjoyed this. GREAT WORK! |
 Hermonthis 2004-02-27 . chapter 1Whoa. @_@ A very unusual twist in the end, especially when the blonde happened to be Buffy.
This was indeed interesting, a bit of the old Cordelia back in Sunnydale High, and Angel seemed a tad OOC. Overall, quite a nice fic!
Best line for me was:
"The torture she would go through for that man... pire." XD |