Hi
I just read your story it was very good.

Wow, this was truly an awesome story! I can't believe you killed Broots (I know what you mean, I love Broots too I bet that was hard killing him) but his death also fit the story. Where'd you get the name David? Is it something in the show that I missed, or did you make it up? It kinda fits, he looks like a David now I think of it...
Loved the Miss Parker/Jarod angst you've got here. I'm a real fan of them together and I loved the way you wrote it here with a hint of them realizing that something is there, but not going for it yet.
You've got all the characters down, especially Lyle. This whole thing is so something he would do!
Anyway, this is an awesome story, I know you finished it a while ago, but I was reading The Family Woman (another awesome story! I don't think I've reviewed it in a while, if at all, can't remember at the moment)and I found this one, so I had to read it. You're really good at Pretender fanfics, so keep writing em! :)

Finished! But what an ending...hu... Debbie at the graveyard... I'm lucky that you already continued this story! So, great chapters, great story, (even if I repeat myself)

See you next story ;)
Carestel

So I was right! It obvioslly IS Mr.Raines! Ehh..sorry Mr.Lyle...*lol* (Very funny idea!)

gr... always thoose horrible centre-peoples... But life would be boring without them, wouldn't it?

I'd eat my shoes if this wasn't MR.Lyle or MR.Raines...Or was it soemeone else?

If you could see me right now, I bet you would laugh... I'm leaning to my Computer, with eyes wide open and holding my breath, expecting to push the 'next' button to read on.

Great Chapter, great Story!

God!
You really know HOW to shock a reader...Jesus...

But I like this, it's good written...*smile* (I like all youre storys cause they're good written...)

Hu, thats a scary one... Have to read on...see you next chap!

Hi leochick,

Bravo! This was a Great story. When I found your sequel, Back in Black, I just had to read this story. Sorry,I didn't leave an individual review for each chapter, but just could not stop once I started reading. Your interpretation of the characters was perfect. Loved the suspence and the action, eventhough the end was heartbreaking. You did an Exquisite Job.
Looking forward to more of your stories.
Mercy

I just found this story, and I liked it!
you kept your readers guessing, there were a lot of twists and turns in the plot, and you read your readers right... we, or at least I *shrug, g* don't know how I feel about you killing off Broots, but you're right in the fact that there are few fics that do that. Nice pioneering. A little too sappy during the tender parts, but other than that, nice job!

oh, and good job on your latest video 'broken'! it's good! (now if i can only remember how to save it to my comp... :p)

Great ending! This was an incredible story. You are so good at making these great tP stories that are so different from the cliche ones, and they always turn out to be fabulous. It would be really cool to see this story continued. I love the idea of Debbie and J2 getting together. Anyway, congratulations on the story!

Emily

What a marvelous story. I LOVE finding finished ones I've never seen before...none of that pesky waiting for chapters. Your mystery was excellent, I was so surprised it was Lyle after all. Also, I'm glad you braved Broots death. It really isn't one written of much and in some ways its hard to think of him ever truly living happily ever after, but his sacrifice (or Syd's) is the only thing that would shock Ms P enough into finally leaving with Jarod. I hope the muses srike you again for another tale!

Well umm ... That was really sad. but Im sure theres a good reason for it later in the story. Your doi8ng great with the plot so far. Later.

*Sniff* I still can't believe that you killed Broots... it was, wr-wr-wrong. *sob* Good story but it was still so...so...sa-a-a-d *breaks off crying and runs away, her tears trailing through the air behind her*