I'm sorry to intrude on your fanfiction stories, but I just finished reading "Koibito no Ryu" on your fictionpress account and was wondering if you were going to get around to making a sequal or updating that account? I know I'm not just speaking for myself, but many avid readers when I say that I really enjoyed your story and would love to read more.

S. Chase

If I remember correctly Tomite was the one who controlled ice and Hikitsu was the one who controlled water right? I think you did an excellent job with their characters. I can definately imagine the two of them like that. Although I think Hikitsu would be a little bit more offstandish.

i likes it a lot
write more, ne?
there's not enough w/ those to in them
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Thank you, although your Genbu fic is probably better than mine. _
I can't bealive that this fic hasn't gotten more reviews! It's so good! I love it! And the idea is great too! You really describe thrir emotions well. My favorate part is at the beginning when Hikitsu is describing how it is a curse to be immortal. Well, keep it up! I hopw to see some of your other writings some time.
Hydra-Star

i like the way u add the lyrics into the story and everything... v meaningful... thanks...

I've already told you what I think of it, but I'm reviewing anyway. You're welcome for the beta-ing! You know it's fun for me! . I really think that this fanfic fits in the the glimpses into their characters that we got in the anime. Hikitsu and Tomite are, of course, pretty much mysterious character-wise, but the characters that they have in this fanfic blend nicely with their demeanor in the episode.