so how does it end? good though.

A lot of things is not making sense to me now. I think the more I read, the more it confuses me. How come on Chapter 1, it was Andrew who was the first to know about Serena's special case. Serena even revealed all her secret to him and was helped by him in dealing with her parents and moving out. I even thought that Andrew was starting to like her, more than as a friend. BUT HOW COME in this chapter (the end of forever) andrew just found out about the truth after the scouts. I felt like Im reading back wards...

Also I was kinda wondering was it normal for a doctor to assume that her teenage patient who could possibly be pregnant, to assume that she was sexually assulted or rape INSTEAD of asking her first if she's in relationship which (in my opinion) is the most logical thing to think and ask first before assuming for the worst? Then theres andrew, when serena told him at chapter one that darien was not the father (that was before the dna test in 'the end of forever' chapter) and andrew assumed the worst thinking that its either her father or her brother that got her preggo. I was like, whats up with these characters always assuming for the worst...

Im saying all these not to make you feel bad, Im just expressing what I felt. Despite all the confusion, I STILL INTEND TO FINISH THIS STORY because there is something about this that made me want to continue because I appreciate the Moral Lesson you are trying to express in this story. Im hoping that when I finish this, all my questions will be answered. I still think that its a great story so please continue writing especially SM stories. I ask for forgiveness to if some part of this comment offended you in any way, it is not my intention to do so.. Thank you.

W-O-W...this was really a great story I have alot I really want to say but I'll minimize it a bit first off I loved the story it was really great I loved ur effert and devotion to the story ur flawless detail ur story has really important morals that are true to life thou I can't say I have experince in many things about life I'm only 14 but I do know how to lose some feels like my dad died when I was about 7 or 8 as u said "what doesn't kill us makes us stronger" I can relate I've had alot to deal with for my age from family to school I glad u wrote this story it had a fantastic and meaningful thought to it really touch me keep writing

WAIT... Andrew already knows that she's pregnant! That's why he helped her with the apartment...I AM SO CONFUSED! Could you please elaborate?

This chapter was very good! But I am incredibly confused about Darien. Didn't Serena make him leave after she woke up? But now when everyone comes to help Raye he's back... could you please explain?

Ani

your story is amazing. its so well written and well detailed. if this were a book id definitely buy it (;

just one thing i noticed was that in the begining andrew already knew about serena being pregnant right? or did i not read well?

Well, I read this chapter through the email you sent on SMRFF and it makes a lot more sense seeing the section break lines on here. LoL!

Anyways, nicely done! It's definitely interesting to think about the possibility of it happening to Serena. I'm a die hard Darien and Serena fan so I'm internally yelling at their decisions, but am hopeful things will work themselves out. I also like Andrew being there for her. Not something I would have expected, to be honest. I so can't wait for Raye and the rest of the Scouts...not to mention Luna and Artemis' reactions to the news.

I'm looking forward to the revised chapter 2. I am highly tempted to read the other chapters you have here, but I'm heading your warning and going to stick it out. Here's hoping the next revision comes in short time. *Crosses*

Again, nicely done and I'm glad that you posted this on SMRFF. Take care and happy writing/revising! _

o.0 i am soo confused

i really loved this story, it had an effect on me and i must say it was beautiful. by the way i do know what its like to lose someone my mom died from cancer April 7, 2008 so i understand how you feel i talk about her and that's how i deal with the pain of loosing her. my e-mail address is if you want to talk

*she found herself rushing to the Forbidden Teleporter, and going

to Earth*

-wait wait wait... it's FORBIDDEN to go to Earth and yet... you make a teleporter with which to go... 'oh, yeah, you're not allowed to go there but let's make a way for you to do so anyway!' what the hell? WHY? it's stupid, it's idiotic! but then again, apparently God created the Devil even though he knew what the fuck would happen...

eh, sorry, needed someone to rant to besides my brother... .

great story

This was very good! I liked what you said at the end for the AN.

Man this story was-is- good! The morals of this story are good to remember and I'm sure a lot of readers will keep them in mind.

wow! I loved this story.. great job! please keep writting!

I love this story so much, it was very different to some of those I've read before. Keep up the good work and message me when you start another story.

Best wishes, Lady Lunarian