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| List of Romantics 2007-06-17 ch 1,  | abuseSome authors mistake a quantity as being better; more isn't always better, it's just... more. Being able to communicate WELL with brevity, yet doing justice to the narrative/story, THAT is one of the hallmarks of good writing--you've got it in spades! I wish you would write more! You are too gifted to let it waste, unused. Get Inspired and WRITE MORE! |
| Luc Star 2005-05-16 ch 1, | abusevery good take on the cassandra character... true i've not read any batgirl comics and i'm starting to think i should start after reading a few really good fanfictions. |
| Cassandra Cain 2005-02-18 ch 1, | abuseCute. I like the portrayal of Cass in this, and the comparisons they make. Lovely. |
| VeltaIO 2004-12-13 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. Loved the nice, dark background for Alfred. We rarely get to see him outside the manor but he did have his own life. |
| Caia 2004-05-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, lovely! I like the view of Alfred's past, and it really works that these two understand each other so well. |
| Meljean Brook 2004-04-26 ch 1, | abuseLovely -- Alfred and Cass, two of my favorite characters caught in a simply wonderful moment. Love the conversation, and the insight into Alfred's past. Using Cass as a method of telling both their stories is so impressive...your talent shines here. And a reference to poor Dorian...! Gotta love that. |
| JuhFreak 2004-03-27 ch 1, | abuseThis deserves ten thousand more reviews. I loved it. I, too, am often inspired to write Batman when reading about war, and what you did here was awesome. I don't think I saw a single mistake. So refreshing, and it really draws you in. Not to mention sweet. Please write more! *adds you to Author Alert* |
| Alyssa 2004-03-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked this, it was pretty cute, and it's nice to see Cassandra relating to someone like this, Alfred as well. Most of the time he's only seen as a background character, the butler, and finally we have more background story in a fan fic. |
| Kimberly T. 2004-03-01 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done! |
| Esther-Channah 2004-02-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is fantastic! You've got the dialogue perfect and the characters are completely in character. This works so well, I can't believe this is your first posting here. Hope it's not your last. Oh, and great reference to the Picture of Dorian Grey, oops! I mean Dick Clark. |
| RobinofYJ 2004-02-29 ch 1, | abuseOutstanding story. Hope to read more from you. |