Great start.


Looking forward to reading the rest ;)

Still a good read. Catherine's character is inconsistent; can't tell whether she's a ** or a friend. And I love Grissom epiphanies. *grin*

Aw! So sweet at the end! I was actually crying! Great job!

...omg I really, really liked this. The angsty part was great! you have some real talent! Great job! ^_^

This was sweet. Hope you do more stories soon.

That story rocked! I loved it.

A real pleasure to read, Shannon. Kudos on getting the Geeks where they want to go, and doing such a great job portraying their emotions and angst (and eventual happiness, too). Sweet ending with the ring--leave it to Griss to cut right to the chase when he needs to. ;-) Thanks for writing this!

Wonderful Wonderful!
The characters were all so well understood. I could see this being an actual episode.
Also, it was so nice to read a story with perfect grammer and spelling!
Thank you!

Overall, this was a very good story, but I did feel the ending was a little rushed. It would have been nice to have a bit more there.
I liked Sara's reflections on her colleagues, her reactions to what was going on, and Brass having to push Grissom at times. Hope to read more by you in the future.

I'm certainly glad Grissom went after her and convinced her of his love. Perfect ending.

I really enjoyed this. You did a great job with each of the characters and their mind sets.

Cheesy? NO!
I love a happy ending. ;)
Hopefully this has set the tone for my entire day, as I leave for work with a perma-grin plastered to my face. :)

Very satisfying-thanks for Grissom's taking the lead for once!
Looking forward to Chp 9!

This is wonderful. Seeing Grissom's awakening, and Sara's pain is heartwrenching. I love that Warrick is the one who can comfort her. I always thought Warrick was actually better friend material, as far as Sara is concerned, than Nick.

whooho go grissom let the chase begin i love it and i love this story. please hurry with next chapter