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| Claire 2004-08-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, that was lovely. And heartbreaking obviously. Anyone who writes GSR to the strains of Tom McRae is great in my books. |
| Jendeh 2004-04-11 ch 1, | abuseYour writing is so poetic, something that I admit I am envious of. You are very very talented. Once again a splendid example of writing! |
| edgypeanuts 2004-03-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseOuch. Heartbreaking and beautifully written. |
| Pam 2004-02-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseargh the angst of it all, you have me almost in tears it was that angsty. Beautifully written...but did i mention the angst?! |
| Psycho Goddess 2004-02-28 ch 1, | abuseMe thinks you enjoy the angst too much. ;-) Gr... Once I stopped sniffling I had to decide whether I loved or hated this story. You should take small comfort you managed to provoke such strong emotion. This is one of those "Why do I have a feeling I'll read and reread this story despite the fact it's too tragic" types. Wonderful use of the English language, great characterization, madly in love with the whole lack of confessed love and waiting for her smile. Too sad. BTW, go post more BoR. Now! Before I bite ya! Okay, not really. Before I'm forced to submit a review on it. Really. Do you honestly want more comments from me? Didn't think so |
| Anansay 2004-02-28 ch 1, | abuseso beautifully written. so timeless in its essence, that moment just before death when time seems to stand still and everything is clear and yet it's not really there at all. I can find no fault in this, nor would I want to. It is beautiful in its morbidity. :) |
| spectora 2004-02-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautiful |
| illman 2004-02-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, powerful angst. You sure have a way with words. Very well written! |
| wyldheart 2004-02-28 ch 1, | abuse*Sniffles* That was beautifully written and tragic and so, so moving. The opening was fantastic, and the ending was powerful. Awesome, awesome job! |
| CSIShipperGirl 2004-02-28 ch 1, | abuseOMG!! How could you kill Sara? That was so wrong and so sad *snif*. Other than that It was a great fic. CSISG |