BRilliant.. i was hooked all the way. great pprotrayal of characters,,
Perfect
10/10

What?! Is that it? Aw...I think it's sweet!! No ofense, I think the ending was slightly rushed. But it was still good. ^_^ A Percival/Lilly pairing was very interesting and new. Very awesome!

*squeals* That's so sweet! I love this! The ending was kind of abrupt, but it was really good ^^ *much love*
Always,
Lily

^_^ Nice. Hope to see your next fic soon.

Aw!!
Cute! Nice chappie there, good ending. ^^

Kawaii!! I loved it. You portrayed the characters perfectly as how they appeared in my mind. I hope you'll come out with more Suikoden fanfics soon. Honestly, I couldn't find anything to complain about although I don't think Gustav would have been so closed minded as that. Still, it's your story and you did excellent.

The End?! NO!! IT'S TOO SHORT!
Sequel? Please write the sequel!! You have to.

This is good. I really like it. Not many Lilly fics peaked my interest esp one that involves Percy!! Well, do continue or I shall bring Luca back to life just to maim you!

O... the angst! The neverending angst!!
Lol, nice chappie, keep up the awesome work. ^^

I liked your story, it's been a while since I enjoyed reading a SuikodenI fiction. Don't make us wait, please update ! ^^

Poor Lilly...Poor Percival...Very funny chapter!! I can't wait to read more!!

Aw. Poor Percival.

Hope he will prevail. Against all odds!

Nice, as always ^^ Please continue. I love this story!
Always,
Lily

OMG! I love this story! I never immagined a Percival and Lilly romance but hey!! Anything is possible, right? I find it so cute!! Please continue with your story soon!!

I like this fic so far, I can't wait to see what happens when her father comes.