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| Jazmin3 Firewing 2006-03-14 ch 12, anon. | abuseHm. Started out funny, and then got more serious. But all of it was really good. |
| D.B. Rae 2005-06-02 ch 1,  | abuseOh that was too funny! OMG! Itsy-bitsy! *Gasps for air* LOL |
| Erisinia 2004-11-19 ch 10, anon. | abuseHa! Brilliant! And I am inordinately pleased with myself; I know what that means. 'habitually penniless'. At least, I think that's what that is. |
| KariAnn 2004-09-08 ch 11, | abuseDifferent than the other chapters. It shook me up a little. Your Teal'c is true to the character. It has always bothered me that so many people write Teal'c as a "bodyguard" but not as the "First Prime". |
| KariAnn 2004-09-08 ch 10, | abuseOkay, I had to go and look up all those words. I do want you to know that my non-stargate co-worker is laughing herself silly concerning your beginning quotes |
| Mere 2004-08-01 ch 12, anon. | abuseWow. Intelligent, well written, and just da[]n good. You don't come across something with all three of those attributes every day here. The drama's done as well as the comedy, and... _wow_. I'd tip my hat if I wore a hat. Well, the sentiment's still the same. :) |
| lady rosebit 2004-08-01 ch 6, | abuseI love your quotes! |
| lady rosebit 2004-08-01 ch 4, | abusei LOVE this story! I practically laughed my eyes out! |
| caysha 2004-03-10 ch 6, | abuseThis stuff is just fantastic! I really like the little horoscopes at the top too. (Have you ever read Good Omens by Terry Pratchett and Neil Gaimen? There is a moment like that in there) The tree/hand signals and the whole Capricorn: cell torment of captors chapter was hilarious. Love it, can't wait for an update! Thanks |
| Thel 2004-03-08 ch 4, | abuse(Reviewing myself... how low will I go... :P) KariAnn... remember some of Sam's mop-top hairdos? A pin or two will keep them under control for military situations. Seems fairly reasonable. ;) Actually, the question is 'why a lock-and-key system', since Goa'uld usually use push button or technological locks. (I have an answer, but I'm not sharing :P) That's it... in my next fic, Teal'c has the hairpins! :D Thel |
| KariAnn 2004-03-08 ch 4, | abuseHairpin? Okay after much thought I can't think of an alternative, but why would Sam have a hairpin? Just as part of her "just in case we get caught and need a hairpin to pick the lock" military gear? |
| dietcokechic 2004-03-04 ch 3, anon. | abuseHee hee- Jack with love handles? I don't think so! This is a fun little series of vignettes. Love the little horocope bits at the beginning. More please! |
| BizzyLizzy 2004-02-29 ch 6, | abuseThis is a really good series, you've got a great mix of humour, lightness and more serious moments. Hope you continue soon. |