No... you can't have abandoned this! It is excellent so far. I have been reading it non stop all day and then it just stops...

*gets on knees*

Please think about finishing this.

I can not wait for you to add, I believe this to be one of the most well written peices yet. I do hope that you continue

very well written thank you for the wonderful story

Write more! Its been so long! Surely you have more to the story?

i knew starting to read this amazing story you abandoned it, which is a very sad fact. I hope one day you can pick it up again to finish a well thought out story.

you havned updated since 04! update oon please!

Hello
You haven't updated this story in a really long time...are you ever going to?

Please try and complete this book if you get the chance, it is a wonderful piece of artwork. I read The Twenty and LOVED it, so I read this and to me this story is even better. I hope you find it in your heart to finish it I really am looking forward to reading the remainder of the story. You are a GREAT storyteller and I hope that your personal life has worked itself out. Bless you.

wow, its great, wow
i await the next chapter

WOW is all i can say.

that was great, please update soon, i would love to know how it all ends.

wow please hurry with the next chapter i love this!

...this is brilliant! I love this story, I loved your other story, and PLEASE update this! I'm now off to seach vainly for a finished version SOMEWHERE...This is really too great to stop now, even if you haven't updated in...years or whatnot...

wow this story is great!! I can't wait to see how it will end.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?