I have read a few of your birthday fics, and I like them. You have several unique ways of writing surprise birthday presents.

wekekekekekke, akirnya gw nyempet juga baca ni fanfic,,
sumpeh dasyath banget critanya, padahal di kenyataannya kan GA MUNGKIN oom Tezu seromantis itu, pasti kalo fuji jadi pacarnya, kacang mahal abis dya, kekekeekekke
oke d, berkaryalah vina! gw fans elu kq! bagus banget crita2 elu!! bikin yg lbh slashy donk! =p

OOC. It's the only thing that came into mind. I know that I've reviewed this story in the other one, but I'm doing you a favor here.

As I was saying, Tezuka is WAY too OOC. He doesn't use exclamation mark whenever he said something. He just doesn't.

Several grammatical errors, but not bad. Yaru jan. Heheh.

a'o...
ceritanya bagus! Tp lumayan OOC. Gpp, tetap berusaha yah!!

hi!!Nice Fic!! It's not bad but you noe...I kinda not really into YAOI so...
but still good though! Keep up the good work, I'm waiting for ur next fic. c ya!

Nice one!! It's cute! gw kira lo ngga jadu nulis? Btw, ini TezuFuji apa OishiEiji yang jadi main pairingnya? Dasar Golden Pair mania ^^;

Fuushwa! uhm, yeah, lots of OOCness... and some grammar mistakes... but it was still good. Ja~

how many times have i told u not to use capslock on my nick?!?!?!?!?!? -_- anyway... kakkoi!XDD tapi... ooc try ur luck next time. hehehe canda d. idenya dah bagus, tinggal characterization ma grammar aja. ganbatte ne!
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