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Reviews For: Sorrowful Reflections
marasolo 2004-03-05 . chapter 1
Short and sweet. So, Gendo *is* human. :-P Interesting AU-ish. (Wouldn't be fair for a review to be longer than the fic, now would it?) Keep up the good work!
dennisud 2004-03-01 . chapter 1
Someone did something very similar a few years back and again it was the same . Short to the point and sad. Nice job.
dennisud
The Dougler 2004-02-29 . chapter 1
STUPID! YOU ARE SO STUPID! They were all born in 20 not 2001! Dun dun dun dun dun dun dundundundun dun dun dun dun OKTOBERFEST!
PhilG 2004-02-29 . chapter 1
Not a bad little short-fic. As you said, doesn't fit anywhere, and Rei, of course, would not be smiling at any time, with 3 exceptions. Still and all, nice writing style, no errors, easy to read formatt. You should do some more stories. Perhaps keep them on the serious side, since you do that rather well, but then again, I haven't read any of your other work, so I don't know if you do humor or any other genre well or not, I guess.
One suggestion: Add more description to your work. You can do a lot to add to the mood/feel of the story if you add more descriptions of places/dress/weather and other such things in.
All in all, good fic.
PhilG
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