You're an excellent writer and right now, my fave Hiei/OC story. Keep going!

"I know it's been a while. Anywho. Heheheh... That's good. Something new to barge into... Do continue."

Izanami

lol. poor mizuko! that wasn't quite the way to tell everyone. interesting though. lol. well, can't wait for the next chapter! glad to see you updated!

hey hey~ funny chapter hehehe oh, and dont worry about the slow updates~~ i'm pretty busy myself to read =_=| take ur time la~~

Heh... good fic =)
Now... update...
Please?

AW! that was sweet! awesome scene! can't wait till you continue!

Oh no... Tou or what ever is going to try and do something... ^.^ But I'm happy for the two now... Please continue.

Izanami

haha icic now ^^ dont worry~ its not a problem to me if u update late~ school stuff is more important right?? =P work hard lo!! good luck!! >.^

WHOO-Hoo! ^_^ great chapter, they kissed, they kissed! WHO-ahem-I got excited he, he, he *stupid grin* this to me at least was a very emotional chapter and I loved it, it had that some what kind of...I don' t know-um-dramatic feel to it! Amazing job as always, looking forward to reading more soon, I enjoyed this chappy as well, well se yah later! ^_O

I SO TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY! LOL! and thanks for the translations their really helpful! :) Keep up the good work and update soon! LOL! And even thought I love Kurama more than I LOVE Hiei I completely adore this story! And you are right lasting couples don't fall in "LOVE" over night! HA! In your face, 'LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT'! Hahahahahahahahaha! Heh!
Yours truly-
Princess Shadowvat
P.S. Tai is a DAMNED BASTARD! But Kou isn't so bad, oh and why is he tied to Tai anyway?

* Pouts* NO! No cliffy' s, pwease don' t tell me its true?" *shakes Samael*
Samael: -_- " Its true."
C/A: *Anguishing screams* " IT IS TRUEE!" *tears out hair*
Okay! This chapter just totally killed me, that was a truly sticky, sticky situation Hiei and Mizuko are in, good GOD! I thought I would pass out because of the suspense.
Samael: *snickers* " I love suspense."
I love this story! Update son! ^_0

whe~ new update ^^ that was a cool chapter~ but so many 'enemies' lol and how come hiei lasted shorter than mizuko?? -_- plus, she had a broken shoulder... gotta be hard to carry hiei and run at the same time lol

That has gotta suck. A pack of Makai wolves and a huge monster... I wonder when Hiei is gonna wake? Please continue.

Izanami

Oh my gosh i think i going to cry that is so sad *tear Tear* thank goodness Kurama is there to save them. plz hurry and write the next chapter ^__^

I did not know Kazuma could open a vortex with his sword... I hope Hiei and uh... Mizuko.. That's it! Yeah I hope they don't run into trouble... Please continue.

Izanami