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everythingalright
2009-10-03 . chapter 1
Aw!
Just aw!
That was easily the most adorable thing I've ever read.
leona-the-critic
2009-01-11 . chapter 1
*Bursts out laughing*

Actually, because this was written like 5 years ago, I'm not sure it's worth me reviewing. I thought I would, anyway, though.
wandless2
2007-07-28 . chapter 1
Oh I loved the last 6 lines. Hilarious! You ended it really nicely.
HouAreYouToday
2007-01-30 . chapter 1
I think my favorite line is "So I've heard," he grumbled at his mashed potatoes, although the rest of it is pretty funny!
She's a Star Fan Club
2005-12-31 . chapter 1
And now I can't stop laughing.
wandless
2005-11-25 . chapter 1
:)
seghen
2005-08-26 . chapter 1
hahaha, hysterical. great ending
ProfessorSpork
2005-07-19 . chapter 1
::cuhckles merrily:: that boy... needs to take a nice, refreshing drink from the Chalice of Duh.
purplereader
2005-05-27 . chapter 1
Hee hee!
SarcasmRox
2005-01-06 . chapter 1
Awesome :)
The Hazelnut
2004-07-31 . chapter 1
Whether Harry's off in this or not, we readers don't notice because we're having so much fun watching Ron act hilariously like himself. The ending was terrific, by the way.
Jillie Rose
2004-07-21 . chapter 1
Was that an apology?

No.

You sure?

No.

All right then.

Kay.

Have some broccoli.
Melissitchka
2004-07-18 . chapter 1
Great story! I really liked this part:

"He opened his mouth, preparing the most scathing remark he could come up with, and proclaimed--

"Sorry that I kicked your cat and insulted S.P.E.W., Hermione. I’ll never do it again."

Bloody hell.

She arched an eyebrow at him, looking a bit shocked. "What?"

"Nothing," he said at once.

"Don’t be ridiculous, Ron, I know you said something. As a matter of fact, it sounded eerily like--"

"Don’t know what you’re talking about," Ron interrupted quickly, and shoved a piece of broccoli into his mouth."

and

"Ron wondered exactly when Harry had become an intimate enough acquaintance that he was allowed to chop off the second syllable of her name."

A really enjoyable read overall.
HiddenFlame42
2004-04-16 . chapter 1
Once again, another great one...*applauds*
Crys
2004-04-08 . chapter 1
I know I read this before, I know I did.
And it was definitely a Crys who gave you this. I mean, broccoli? Totally my ingenious word.
Cute. :) I liked your characterization of Ron, too. H/G is darling, ya know, as usual.
la la la.. going to sleep.
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