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Bamboo Tora
2009-10-28 . chapter 17
I wrote a whole review, went to send it, and my computer ate it! I blame netzero and microsoft *shakes fist*

I first came across this story 2 years ago and have been checking it ever since. I'm so very happy you started updating again. I come back and re-read it every so often because it is just that good.

I was glad to see some scenes more centered on the other characters and their developing relationships. I also can't wait to see what Marcus is up to because it's just so fun to hate on the really big bad guys, especially when they're so deluded and narcassistic.

I can't help but wonder how Kagome is coping though. I know you delt with her trust issues and such in her inner circle but I wonder how she reacts to strangers and if she isn't a bit jumpy still. I can't wait to see how she reacts when she learns that Marcus made bail. The cops do have to inform the victim up stuff like that don't they?

Another thing but I wonder, if Marcus meets up with an old flame won't she not want to be around him because of his violent and obsessive behavior?

Looking forward to your next update. Know you have faithful readers patiently awaiting the next splendiferous chapter!

Also, thanks for the awesome new playlist on my ipod I got from this story!
blueishadow
2009-10-26 . chapter 17
Well, I've been following this since chapter one, though through a few different pennames, I never was good at having just one... but I must say I've never followed a story for this long, it's definite;y kept my interest well! I love it, and I am very excited to read more, so please, update soon! Many of us are awaiting chapter 18!

Beautiful story
Oku
2009-09-24 . chapter 1
YAY! You're working on this story again. I'm so happy I read this years ago and revisit it occasionally to see if there is more, along with Second Chance. I even printed them both out so I could read them whenever I want in their multi-hundred paged goodness : )
Kuronueslover
2009-09-08 . chapter 17
i love this! sessy-chan is such a softy! pls update soon, author-sama!!
Rhonda
2009-08-30 . chapter 17
So sweet! can't wait 4 more chapters. Nice work.
ShindyNova
2009-07-24 . chapter 17
lol that was adorable. Well done
IrisAyame
2009-07-19 . chapter 17
Oh! I just can't wait for the sequel! Your story is very good! I've read it all the day and now it's 3h48 in the morning... Your story stole my rest! lol!
Thanks for writing it!
Just a suggestion... we never know if their band starts to become famous (at last in their own town) nor can we sometimes read some magazines extacts... I think that maybe it can be interesting to know if they are getting more known as artists... But it's your story, you must do as you like it!

Thanks for writing!

Iris
Sesshomaru2004
2009-07-13 . chapter 17
nice keep it up
InvisbleOneWithNoFaith
2009-07-08 . chapter 17
Loved the chapter. ^_^
Sunshine-Cutie
2009-07-04 . chapter 17
i donno if this would help but i have a song that is really good and might be good in your storry, the singer is a guy tho, but his voice is pretty high for a guys, its called "My Obsession" by Cinema Bizarre

again i know its a guy that sings it and its not really rocky but every band atleast has a balad so i hope it can come to some use to you and i love your story, update soon ^.^
Dana Daidouji
2009-07-02 . chapter 17
An update! I really liked this chapter! What better way to improve one's scores than the promise of money? XD
InNerSyMphOnY
2009-07-02 . chapter 17
Its been a while since I've reviewed but I wonder where it is that you're going with this. Sometimes I understand it and other times I don't. Dragging out this whole romance between Sesshoumaru and Kagome, not to mention making Kagome such a big victim with the abusive Marcus. I feel as if you've lost touch with your story and characters. Maybe I'll check back on this when you complete the story but as of right now I'm disappointed with the direction that it is heading.
Blueberry Babe
2009-07-02 . chapter 17
thank you again for a wonderful story. I cant wait for the next chapter. I hope we get to hear about kagome's mysterious past sometime soon. more please...
jazzyinuluvsesshyxxoo
2009-07-02 . chapter 17
Wonderful chapter!
I am quite excited for the next one too!
Jasmine xoxo /'.'\
dreamy712
2009-07-01 . chapter 17
So glad to see an update after so long! i almost forgot about this story, but im right back into it. Love the story and cant wait for more!
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