That was cute. Here I was expecting it to be about Wakka, but Brother? Well, I do like his character, and there aren't too many stories about him. Nicely done.

Aww, he can't talk to women. It's sweet though. I almost never play blitzball, so I don't know who Svanda is.

i must be stupid cause i don't get the puns. except for that one about scoring. but it's cute and i've never even noticed who svanda is before.

... You know, I only just noticed you wrote this, which is a horrifying shame because somehow you managed to make the CUTEST THING IN THE EXISTENCE OF CUTE.

... oh man there go my Blitzball games now. "Hee, hee! Look at Svanda giving Brother the eye!"

I loved "But he didn't know her language, and thinking wasn't his forte, so he did what he did best. He threw her the ball." Beautifully sentimental all the more for being unsentimental; simple, lovely.

LOL, that was cute. :) I like the fact that you chose to focus on Brother of all people, and the awkwardness was adorable.

I wonder why in English Blitzball is called Blitzball XD
In German I can understand, but "blitz" is a German word, isn´t it?
So, why is it called "Blitz"ball?
Is it because it is as fast as a flash? O_o
I don´t understand...

write more, please. It's looks great right now.

love triangle! hehehe cool keep going

Man...I want your game, because I can't play Blitzball for beans :P But the puns were really punny, so keep writing!