love it!!

great story

This story is great!
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Oh, it was very beautiful short story. I do not know, maybe you at the end wanted to show Dumbledor in a little better light, but I have him the whole story hate and in the end I had the taste to kill him (Dumbledor).
Power beautiful short story, but it Dumbledor there. Nice story and pay-off.
Perhaps this is too confusing, just do not know English very well...

Wow, what a sweet ending. It almost made me cry. What a healing, to help the next generation so he wouldn't have to go through the suffering Harry went through. And Snape. Somehow I think Snape will be helping to raise Jason.

Because at the bottom of the screen is encouraging me to make constructive criticism, the one thing I would say is you need a better beta who will find all the little mistakes in grammar and word choice. I can offer my services - I've done beta work and my eye for detail is excellent. And I'm a native English speaker. Contact me if you want to take me up on it, either revising the stories you've already posted, or for new work.

Back to the story - I really loved the psychological true-ness of this story. People acted like real people. Very insightful. Such a warm story, with a good heart. I loved the ending. I'm used to reading HP/SS slash so I was disappointed they didn't end up in each other's arms, but I suppose that wouldn't have belonged in such a realistic story. I loved the way you brought Snape and Harry together.

Good story, not one of your bests but still very good. The feelings weren't transmitted good enough for my taste. But the writing was fluent and the storyline clear. Nice twist in the End - It was the Beginning ... The End ^^
Thank you for writing and posting

aW, I REALLY LIKED THE ENDING, GOOD STORY

very good, very sad. i'm confused baout where heather comes into play... but i guess i will find out!

very good, i like a lot

I have to admit, this was nothing like what I was expecting. It was a lot more complex then most Harry/Snape friendship fics I’ve read. The end was on the sweet side but the amount of angst through the rest of the fic definitely balances it out. This was beautiful work. ~ZLB

thank you. that is a wonderful story

I realy liked this. Very refreshing. Hoping (although I fear it shall be in vain) for a sequel. Thanks for the great read; appreciated!

Brilliant story.
every chapter was great especially the last one.

Brilliant storys please continue writing! and in english please lol im afraid i dont know the other language is it german?

Very nicely done. I loved the part about Dudleys son looking just like Harry. Hoping to hear more from you soon. Thanks