it so cute

AWESOME story. I love that song!

This was awsome I love zel/lina pairings I hope you write more soon!

Kawaii! That was an awesome ZEL/LINA fic! Good job.

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Me

Yay, more Lina/Zel goodness! _
If ya wanna know, I plan on reading all your stuff within the next few days... as in, the next two days. Possibly three. I started with "snow," but after that I just started at the bottom and am working my way up.
Hey, there was actually some content in my review!
Others: *gasp*!
-.-; Excuse me, I need to go fireball some people...
Others: *slowly inch away*

This is a wonderful fic. I can picture it playing out in my head. I even saw choreography. It was beautiful. I love your choice for Lina's dress. The sprint gave credibility to their dancing and made it even easier to visualize. Great dialogue, too. I love the Hook, Line, and Sinker. Keep up the great work!

It's good! _ Yay! Finally, I found a Zel/Lina fic!

WOW! That's good. I'd give ANYTHING to be able to dance with Zel... Nee hee hee... ; Ja ne!

That was the best Lina and Zel story I've read in a long time! I loved it! Really good choice of lyrics (and band..SG is my fav ) for the fic! You should make a sequel to it!

I LUVED IT! So KAWAII! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE!I'm changing my MSN name to Zelly-chan now! PLEASE WRITE MORE!

So kawaii! _ I love Zel/Lina pairing... So, great

Lina/Zel; strike one. Hook... Extremely well-written; strike two. Line... Absolutely hilarious and fun to read: sinker!

Wow. Didn't know Lina could dance that well! _-

whow! lina and zel are the best! hey who knows mady they are both realy great dancers i haven't seen enought slayers to judge weather they are REALY OOC or not but i like them any way and i never xellos was such a fruit is he realy i've only seen the slayers and the movies i hope he is because then my friend can't HAVE him mawhawhawhawha! (evil laughter) ok i know i have problems anime withdral you know _*

*applauds* Bravo! Reading this fanfiction was delightful. The writer did a terrific job describing the dance (and that is very hard to do. I know, I've tried.), and the interaction and dialogue between Zelgadis and Lina was terrific. Xellos provided an amusing touch, and Amelia bribing Lina in the beginning to wear a dress was hilarious.