I read 'Blue' which lead me to your profile which lead me to this story. Excellent and sad, very sad. It should be a prologue, this has so much potential as a full fledged story. Why did Jou feel he had to leave, where did he go, did he find himself, what happened to Seto during that time, do they get back together? Write it and we will read it.

aw eep! so sad T-T

That was so sad. T_T

Aw so sad. I feel so bad for Jou. *sniff sniff* Now -I'm- getting misty. It was so angsty. But you did it wonderfully. I found it to be written very well, and extremely realistic. I liked it, even if it was incredibley sad. Aw now I'm all teary and **. Ok now I have to find a happy fluffy fic. *scampers off* *waves*
Later yo,

Icy

oh wow~ I really hope it's a prologue, though it makes a excellent one-shot!

A lovely sad beautiful, 'breaking up but not really'-fic. I like the way you wrote the two of them, with both of them being strong characters, only Joey being strong in admitting to a weakness and Seto being strong by ... just being strong. I hope they will find each other again soon, after Joey has sorted out his feelings. ^-^

u know, u really should update your other fics.especially the 'shadow games'one.i want to know what happened.it's best that u complete the fic(cause u don't want to let your reviewers down right?).just really hope u update your fic.please?

OMG...that was so sad... i would actually love more to this story...it just seems so idk but
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