I really love reading this, makes me smile and giggle out loud. You definitely have alot of talent and creativity. Add on, im itching to hear about how James and Lily actually get together!
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I like you're style. I very rarely read long fanfics because their choppy and unrealistic. You're story however is very balanced, and you present believable characters. I also like the way you tell story through a combination pre and post "love" perspectives. That alone could be a disaster, but you do it tastefully. This is very creative. I can't wait to read more.

^^ it's totally awesome so far. Good mix of happiness and sadness. it's always depressing, death... wish there was less of it... but then, it's a neccessary thing... hm... i sound philosophical... i should shut up now. lol. i'm gonna keep up with this fic!

James- hot, tired and sweaty- collapsed onto a couch near his friends,

^^Yum! That's my favorite quote so far. :) Anyway, I love the story you're writing and I think you write a very good, and accurate James (from how I initially imagined him upon reading Snape's Worst Memory from OotP). Anyway, please continue updating! I love this story!

Ack, I'm too lazy to sign in...

but regardless, I didn't want to leave you without a review. I do like it so far! I haven't read it all, of course...and I'm hoping that by the time that I do finish it, you'll have updated...

*Huggles*

Please do so soon, so I won't have to wait. *Takes her sweet time reading*

I like the way the first chapter went so far. *Cheers*

-Chiki

Hey, what a cute post. Its a little sappy and stuff, but so warm and fuzzy. I liked how you mixed the seriousness of the fight into the happy times, showing that through it all they remain looking for the good times. Inspirational!

I'm rally enjoying this so far; your OCs do have a personality, other than being Lily's friends or enemies and I liked the way you did some research for your fic. Makes me think you care.

Great, this is a wonderful story and I hope that you continue it through out the future. My favorite posts are those of 1976!

Awe! Very good story so far! Keep going!

Hope we see Lily and james getting along soon, her high and mighty attitude is getting kinda monotonous. Don't really know how james dealt with it for six years, no matter how much he loved her. Anyhoo, looking forward to your next chapter
Cheers
Max

i lov this...UPDATE!

Your story has me hooked. It's so interesting the moments you choose to show and the way you skip around. The characters seem so true and real and you've captured a great story as well. I love it. I noticed you haven't updated in a while. Please do soon. You can't just leave us hanging!

OMG- that was great. I cant' wait to read more tommorrow. Seriously, everything was perfect! Awesome!

Missy, you are amazing. I love how you go back and forth between the school years and the married life. It's awesome how you named the fracky girl Pandora..how appropriate! This story is right up there at the top! It's in my favorites,so you better write more soon! I'm luvin it! **gives huggles** You're such a doll!

missy you lidacious woman you!

the leash finally lead me into the direction of your lidacious story and all the cookies in the world don't amount to the quality of this story. seriously, the convicted one, it is truly enjoyable to read and i'm going to recommend it to my friends (including the uy's...well, if i had any!;) lol...) i *heart* the gimp moments and the hotness of james and siri *melts like ice cream on a hot day* i have to say that Pandora is such a whoreible...but you always have to those people you hate in a story... i love this downtight story and it is anything but cusk! it is wonderful:)

keep writing but i have to stop b/c i'm feeling abit peckish...

**huggles and cookies times 9184710934719038471093847109347810394871098347190234719023478109234781029347810923847**

kj...the runaway teddors!