Reviews for In the Eye of the Storm

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Silvara 2007-05-08 ch 5,	abuseDéesee--French for Goddess ? No. DEESSE-- yes Through you wrote it righ the first time. It is rare to read an English fanfic with good French. Still, the song WAS good French. Besides I am very happy and feel honored since it is my native language. I can't help but wonder where the plot will lead me... I guess I just have to read the follow to find out... ^^
Lucrecia LeVrai 2007-03-08 ch 12,	abuseIt's been almost a year since the twelfth chapter was posted, so how about some long-overdue reviewing on my part? Maybe it'll motivate you to update this fic? Now, where to start... :) The part with the phantoms in the temple was very powerful; the way it was all written, I could almost touch the specter's blood myself, and then taste Aeris' fear as she was running deeper into the forest. I've already mentioned it before, but I really love the way you're trying to incorporate the medieval tale of Tristian and Isolde into your fic. Sure, what I can see here doesn't resemble the original legend very much, but it only makes things all the more interesting. I found the circumstances of Aeris' awakening really cute, though I was surprised that Sephiroth the super-soldier didn't wake up when the girl was trying to scramble out of the sleeping bag. Maybe he was only pretending to be asleep? ;) I had to smirk at the way they kept bickering with each other in the second half of the chapter. It was completely in-character; amusingly so, even if their quarrel did sound a little bit childish. Actually, I still wish you would interrupt long bits of narrative with dialogue more often. Your descriptive paragraphs are amazingly well written, but I prefer dynamic parts (that is, dialogues) to the static ones. Finally, it was good to see Sephiroth defending Aeris, for a change – because so far it's always been the other way around in your story. The ending of this chapter made me want to backtrack to the very beginning of the whole fic, and see just /what/ I could possibly miss about the man from the caravan, who has always seemed perfectly innocent to me until now. In any case, please find the strength to update this fic soon, because I'm dying to see more of it. The fact that I'm a horrible reader, hardly ever reviewing anything on time, doesn't mean I'm no longer interested in your awesome stories. Bah. Pretty please?
megs626 2007-02-27 ch 12,	abusePlease Please Please update this! this is my secound time reading it and it is one of my favorite stories on FF. I adore everything about it and it would be such a shame if it wasnt finished, so once again Please update!
Peanuckle 2006-12-28 ch 12,	abuseWhen I read chapter 12 it hit me that you were using the names Tristan and Isolde and I remembered the movie. I wonder why i didnt catch it sooner.
Peanuckle 2006-12-28 ch 8,	abuseEvery so often I'll find a story where i get so into it that i think "In this situation, this is what I would have them do." You had Seph flyin off just like I would have written and that was really entertaining for me. Good job!
Lamica-Lee 2006-10-19 ch 12,	abuseRawer! Feed me more! n_n Tis very, very good. Keep up the wonderful work!
Leia 2006-07-27 ch 12, anon.	abusei love this story, aries and sephiroths character are fantastic please please UPDATE ASAP!
Cobray 2006-06-20 ch 12,	abuseLord why have I not read this yet? I must be dumb I guess! Great story Noa. It's nice to see there are still some of us around here making good stories rather than throwaway fiction. I'll be staying tuned. :)
AI 2006-04-22 ch 12, anon.	abuseI love Aeris' backbone. It's refreshing to read something where she has spunk and courage to stand up for herself. Sephiroth is very human; Shinra's victim and confused about himself. Please keep going!
Daughterofaeris 2006-04-19 ch 12, anon.	abuseI'm glad to see you continue this one. It's very good. Chapter twelve was nice. I like when they argue. LOL
DemonSurfer 2006-04-18 ch 12,	abuseO.o Can't talk for long as there are ants all over the desk. Yoroshiku!
VenusBlade 2006-04-18 ch 12,	abuseAh I'm so glad to see an update! Especially after that wicked cliffhanger... Actually, I'm putting off writing a fiction paper currently to read this chapter...so yes...off to do homework. Can't wait to read more!
turtlerad17 2006-04-18 ch 12,	abusewho! Another awesome update! I do enjoy reading these updates for this original AU. You write so well and are very good at plot and character development. I can't wait for the next update.
Ardwynna Morrigu 2006-04-18 ch 12,	abuseI love that last scene where he's just bouncing off with her in his arms! I've got this image in my head of him just flying through the treetops and poor Aeris is just hanging on for her life.
aer-seph4eva 2006-04-18 ch 12,	abuseAs usual, great work Noa! I liked the beginning of the scene. Sephiroth is a heavy sleeper? I have to admit that I would have never expected that! lol. I also, liked the 'clean sweeper' memory. I love reading about Zack/Seph moments because of the dry humour that is always present! Heh, I guess from the way that you finished this chapter, Aeris may have to think twice about parting with Seph. I look forward to your next chapter. Oh. Btw. My TLAA will be updated, very very very soon. Just to let you know! ^.^ Ja ne Aer_seph4eva P.S. I don't know if I have mentioned it before, but your characterisation of Sephiroth is a lot like Sesshomaru. Heh. I was just a random point that I wanted to say.

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