you are not texting. use words. if you don't know something, look it up. if you aren't going to take writing seriously, than don't write. even if the story is good, my hands twitch, and i nearly shut down the window every time you use 'u' instead of 'you' or 'r' instead of 'are'. do it right, or don't do it at all.

I really loved your story!

SoT from your favorite on-line community here. This was a really great effort on your part, original, and niftily organized. I don't watch "Stargate" all of the time and missed the first few seasons but was able to follow the storyline easily so you did very well.

I think it was a very original concept and I like it when people develop their own characters too as opposed to just using existing ones. The ending was bittersweet but realistic and the switches between moments in time were well planned. I just found this recently but read it all as fast as I could.

Your 2nd epilogue is a very nice surprise and provides a very warm and fuzzy ending to the story. Very well done!

You may wish to check chapter 18 there is only half of a page on it where a person is asking "What does it say?

*claps excitedly* i loved it! i stayed up to finish it, it's now *checks time* 3:15 am and i'm very happy i stayed awake this long! GREAT JOB!

Hiya, very good story!
Luv Morwynion

:) keep writing stories and ill read them, this was one of the best ive read in a long time
luck, and keep at it

That was great.

I know sometimes these things spoil the whole good story (and this one IS good), but how about a sequel ? Even if it's just a shot one...PLEASE ?

im just now reading your story and i have to say - im only part wya through but i do hope you romove martoof from the picture. after what happened in chap 16, im haveing a hard time continueing. but have no fear. all in all, its an ecellently written story. kepp it comin!

Wow, you finished it! Thank you for a well written and well-plotted story. I think we all knew how it was going to end, but it was nice to finally get there. Well done, look forward to your next. Cheers, Kawoosh

I just love the story!

Excellent ending.

I'm truly impressed. You almos had me in tears. I've never been that emotionally attatched to an original character..wow. Have I ever cried because of a story? I don't remember. I truly am impressed. This was beautifully written. I laughed, I cried, I kept wishing there was more. It ended well. Angst galore and I loved every moment of it. I'm sending you lots of virtual chocolate with this. I also have snickerdoodles and cheesecake at my disposal if you desire either. Wow. Impressed am I. :)

Great chapter.