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crystal teardrops 2008-06-22 ch 28,	abuseYou have the best grasp of Sesshomaru and Rin's relationship out of all the authors of ff. I'm amazed at how well you wrote it without making Sessh seem ooc. Truly amazing! Well, I'm off to inspect some of your other work now! Congradulations on the completion of this story!
Anakin 2008-05-17 ch 28,	abuseAbsolutely wonderful. So, so well written. There were moments between Sesshoumaru and Rin that were utterly breathtaking, so moving and enthralling. So good. Well done!
Hinatinha 2008-04-10 ch 1,	abuseAnother wonderful fic
Lifestyle 2007-10-26 ch 7,	abuse' "You’ll stay here tonight to sleep.” “And where will you be?” she asked, wondering in a moment of fear if he was intending to leave her there. “I’ll be with you," ' Ahh... you tug at my heartstrings! You certainly know how to touch people's hearts :) Love it. Absolutely love it!
Bob Da Peach 2007-09-16 ch 28,	abuseargh i just spent 2 weeks reading non stop reflected past and then wars shadow. I couldnt stop! yeh well anyways ... its really good and i became overly obsessed with it (yes that is a good thing)this is a joint review coz its for rp as well :D :D :D :D I LOVED THEM! :D :D :D
Angaloth 2007-05-17 ch 28,	abuseAnd then of course, I reread it again and realize that I answered my own question. It is 2am in the morning, so I suppose I am more tired than I thought. She had been speaking Japanese, although from his comment and the placement of "Onegai", and the fact that my brain skipped over the second half of his sentence, made it confusing to me. Sorry about that.
Angaloth 2007-05-17 ch 27,	abuseI know I've already reviewed this story, maybe even this chapter...but I was rereading it and I came across something that somewhat confused me. Maybe I'm just reading it wrong, but what language has Zadi been speaking to Kanaye while he was visiting her? Was she speaking Japanese the whole time, or something else? I only ask because of the comment Kanaye makes while she is applying the makeup to his face. I know that you sometimes use the Japanese words, but the placement of it and his comment at that time made is seemt to me as if she hadn't been speaking Japanese before that moment. But Kanaye canot understand her language, and you say that after he made that comment, she slips into her own tongue. I am assuming that she had been speaking his language throughout the entire thing, but I don't remember him ever mentioning her accent before this moment. Just an odd and somewhat random observation/question. I'm also looking forward to the next chapter of the Serpent's Curse. Hope you did/doing well on your finals. : D
michie123 2006-12-24 ch 28,	abuseThis story was too good. You should continue it. Especially with the lives of Kanaye and Sashe. Well done!
Sandpit 2006-12-16 ch 28, anon.	abuseI absolutely love how you constructed a distinct personality for each of the characters both in this fic and in RP. Like, many times when Sessh said something I had to stop and marvel at how his words were exactly how and what I think he would say in the manga. It was great to see his biting, dark sense of humor too. And holy Molly, talk about character development! Everyone got their moments. I didn't like Sashe at first bc she seemed so stupidly naive and weak-willed. Then as the story went on more and more of her character was revealed, and I actually liked her a lot by the end. Same with Elif. I even wished Sessh would be kinder to her by the later chapters. I still don't like Zadi though. I thought she was far too powerful and perfect. It wasn't that I thought she was unbelievable, but she didn't fit into the IY universe nearly as well as the other OCs like Eizan and Kanaye IMHO. Great job on plotting out such a good story and injecting just the right amount of romance into it (always hard with us demanding fangirls, I know!) Sorry for the long review but I liked it too much! =)
Teela 2006-12-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseSo I have already said how amazing your stories are in the Reflected past review so I just put what I liked in War's shadow particularly. There are many things but most of all there is the Kanaye and Zadi. This is for the very first time that I liked the made up characters more than all original I swear. They are such amazing personalities that I was always looking forward to their next encounter. And Kanaye was just perfect I truly loved his personality and quite undrestand Zadi's affection for him. I even liked him more that Sesshoumaru which says much. And as I said before I loved you vision of SessRin especialy their slow proces of coming in to happy family mode. And you are perfect at making new characters as well as putting interesting background for Inu and Sess's family. I enjoyed all the politics in your story and how complicated the connections between noble lineages were. And last but not least is your ability to show different kinds of character's sense of humor like the clever and dark of Sesshoumaru wicked and perverted of Kanaye and scornful of Inuyasha. And since only clever person can wrote the clever quotes I admire your intelect. There were always surprising situation no cliché no awkwardness. I would love if you made another story or just some epilogue about how Sesshoumaru finally accidentaly or not gave in an create his hanyou and if the same fate found his uncle. If there is some flaw in both stories in my point of view - it's lack of lemons. Well yes I'm bit perverted but with your ability to write I would like to read loving scenes. But even what you show was excellent so don't worry much about that I liked it anyway. So I hope you will write some more and wish you much inspiration as well as time. Thanks for entertaining me and filling my time with the wornderful stories. PS: I'm sorry for my english ^^;
Leandri 2006-07-29 ch 28,	abuseI Love sour story, adoreable:) I can sense it that you have fun writing it, details of the characters are amazing. You aren't talented, you are a GOOD writer! And very smart also, ending of Reflected Past is also of War's shadow:) Great job
ffnetlover 2006-07-24 ch 28,	abuseI loved this story! I really enjoyed the thing with Kanaye and Zadi. If it matters to you, please do the sequal first. I'm dying to know what happens next! Beans
Tevrah 2006-07-05 ch 28,	abuseOHH! This was so good!! I just loved the way you developed the characters! And I especially loved Zadi and Kanaye! They were so great! And Sess and Rin! I hope you can maybe write more about them if an idea strikes you! Bye!
Black Cat 13 Sakura 2006-04-21 ch 1,	abuseTHIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORY EVER AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK "InuOtaku"! {man this story is really and i mean REALLY REALLY REALLY VERY GOOD}:)
babe_galanime 2006-03-25 ch 28, anon.	abuseexcuse me, why is the ending about sess looking at kagome and her baby? i dont get it. i mean isnt this sess/rin fanfiction?! explain plz

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