this is a good storyline. could possibly be better detailed, but I am personally very impressed. keep up the good work! *smiles*

WOW! And I thought I was the only person who thought this way. I make all my characters based off of my personality...so in a way, I believe their alive...like inside me...Watch me get all emotional and stuff. GREAT THINGIE!
*hops off to eat chicken*

whoa... that was cool! You're deep! I gotta try that sometime! Here's a thought for ya: You think there might be someone out there, an "Author", creating our every move, every step we take, our beliefs, our goals... we could ALL just be part of one huge story, one giant master plan. Hehehe, I can be deep too! I'm so proud of myself... :)