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twilight-has-fallen
2009-08-14 . chapter 10
Oh my God. I absolutely feakin love this story. I read all of the other chapters a long time ago but for some reason I never read the last one. When I finally did read it, I almost cried. It was so sweet. I love the way you made Link seem so childish and annoying but then showed that he turned out nicely. The whole plot was amazing even though you thought it was going nowhere. I adore it.
Mitch
2009-03-24 . chapter 10
I feel like I just ate an entire sugar cane, husk and all...and I enjoyed every minute of it.

What a wonderfully delightful story. It was exactly what you both advertised it to be and should have been.

While the plot was obvious (don't worry, Zelink stories all are...and should be) the events, character and interactions were very original.

While the dialogue could get a tad childish at times, overall I found it interesting and entertaining. You did a good job picking personalities for Zelda and Link and sticking with them.

This story is just pure crack for Zelink romance fans. Good job and good luck on all your other writing projects!

The Shadowy Anonymous Reviewer,
Mitch
Moderntwilight64
2008-09-18 . chapter 10
Nicely written! Zelda's outburst after Link's confession actually made me laugh, lol. Keep writing!
moonlight777
2008-07-25 . chapter 10
LOVED IT! It was awesome to read how desperate Link and Zelñda were trying tell their feelings for each other, and they finally did!
Congratulations, is an awesome piece of work!
sra
2008-07-11 . chapter 10
HEY!
you are so good at these!
please make more zelink ones!
i swea ill read them all
=)
Babykoalaprincess (aka BKP)
2008-07-06 . chapter 10
Okay, I know you're not writing Zelink fan fiction anymore... But I've recently re-read this, and I have to say...

THAT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME! I'm sorry, yes, I know. Go shoot me because I totally do understand you're not writing Zelink stuff anymore...

BUT STILL! I HAVE TO BOW DOWN TO YOUR AWESOMENESS FOR WRITING STUFF LIKE THIS IN THE PAST! D: YOU ARE MY GODDESS! I WORSHIP YOU, GIRL! And I just HAD TO review! That's how compelled I felt after reading this super fluffy fan fic!

And I have to say... the Deku Scrub scenes were HIL-ARIOUS. I loved it. I thought it was brilliant.

Also, you say this story is plotless. For some reason, I could argue saying it's not, because you definitely do have something going on in the story that has changes and well... you know. For some reason, I could find a climax in this story so hah. This story isn't that bad. I love it! I ADORE it.

Well, I hope your writing is going well! Whether it's just mere fan fiction to original fiction! Just know you're a talented writer no matter what you write!

-BKP
Bitterly-Me
2008-06-23 . chapter 10
Aww.. That's really cute. I really like the dysfunctional deku scrubs too. They're adorable. lolz. good job on this story! Keep up the good work.

much luv,
-grl4peace
:D
misken67
2008-04-02 . chapter 10
aww. That ending was really cute. The Deku Shrub was an amazing idea! I wonder how Millo fared with his mate...?

Once again, good job! I believe I'm starting to like reading exhaustingly long chapter fics!
misken67
2008-04-01 . chapter 3
Hmm... I liked the reference to "The Herd Boy and the Weaving Girl", though I'm not exactly sure if it was intentional. Chinese folk stories are so under appreciated...

Good Job!
Manus Dei
2008-02-20 . chapter 10
Priceless! Give us more! We praise you!
Manus Dei
2008-02-20 . chapter 2
You're so evil... Mwahahahaha!
Manus Dei
2008-02-20 . chapter 1
Bwahahahaha! I just love the sort of fic where Link drives Zelda crazy. I get the feeling I'm going to thoroughly enjoy reading this.
MalinTheSwede
2008-02-16 . chapter 10
Oh ma oh man! You know I've been waiting to review this? I wanted to wait until the end to review it. I always do that with chapter fics. Anyways, now I can tell you this. HOLY CRAP! THIS WAS SO FANTASTIC. GEZE, YOU WRITE SO GOOD IT MAKES ME CRY! YOU ARE SO GOOD.
Darren
2007-09-19 . chapter 9
i don't mean to sound critical or nit-picky or anything, but you used the blue rupee as 10. blues are worth 5, and yellows are 10.
Green Macadamia
2007-09-09 . chapter 10
Great! I totally loved the end! Yay fluff! I'm a sucker for fluff ^^'

Brilliant story! *applauds* I loved reading it! So cute and sweet. Made me laugh, made me melt; just loved it. I'm actually a bit sad that there is no more for me to read. Ah well. I'm so glad that I read this ^_^ You're brilliant! Kudos to you!

K-San
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