It appears that you abandoned this fic just as things were getting interesting. I don't know anything about the ninja girl (if she's from a commic, or different fanverse, or if she's your original character) but I found her intriguing, and I was looking forward to seeing her interact with Clark at the gala.

I love it! Please update very soon!

Good story. I'm a little lost with the whole Ninja thing. But I'm intrigued and waiting for more, which in my eyes is a good thing.

please post up

Ok, so I read the 8 chapters posted. Please post more soon. This is very good. I don't think I could have ever imagined a twisting Clark in such a fantastic fashion.
Wonderful. Please keep the creative juices flowing.

this is good but u shouldnt make clark such a pussy

You had me hooked at the sumery and I havn't been able to stop reading since.
AU indeed. One, tiny diffrence, and look what happened. It's scary...very very very scary.
Too bad this can't be an actul TV show. I know I'd watch it!
Can't wait for the next chapter!

Ouch, that sounded seriously painful. Poor Clark. Who is that weird little ninja dude? More please. Is Lionel really all that concerned? Hmm... Really good chapter.

Interesting. Please continue very soon. i am curious to see what happens.

I like the idea of Clark using martial arts looking moves to deflect attention from his powers. Good chapter. More please. Maybe a little bit of Lex? A leg would do...

Lol, good one. Brotherly love at its best. Onward to chapter 4

Coolies...is Clark like Lex, all evil and such? Hm...onward to chapter 3!
Myranda Ync

Ohh...good beginning! Cant wait to see what happens!
Myranda Ync

Interesting stroy. Please do continue. I am interested in where you are going with this.

I love the moderate nuttiness of this. It's so much fun. See - Lex could be good for Clark! More please. Really good chapter. I'm hooked. RG.