The thing I love about this is that its creative. You didn't just have them put into... I don't know, but a cliched situation where they automatically fell in love.

You were creative with your situation and I believed it. Hiei was realistic, not OOC at all. It's hard to find good, developed, Hiei/Keiko stories, and even though this was just a one-shot, you wrote this beautifully.

I loved the connection, and the mental anguish they had to suffer to understand one another. This was great.

I like the story, but I feel that if you don't mind writing more to it that it would an could go a let futher than her just waking up an them just realzing that they need each other. So please write more to it please

Ok.

First of all let me establish I'm not a fan of this couple. I really am not. I was just curious when I read the summary of this story and decided to give it try.

I liked it. It's sweet and not to OOC.

that was great i loved the ending.

OH MY GOD! that was so sweet. I loved it so much. hiei and keiko are great together. absolutely perfect.

That was the sweetist Hiei/Kaiko fanfic that I've ever read in my whole life! *_* your an artist!

JA-NE!*_*

I loved it. I don't usually read yu yu hakusho but this one I liked.

FANTASTIC! AWESOME!1

I loved the way you wrote that - it sounded like a beautiful fairy tale. There was a good mix of dark , light, and romance. Please write more Hiei/Keiko stories - or at least, support them.

:)

damnit put some more in to this one, too. I love your stories, god they make me want to more, make me want the story to go on. They are so good if only I could write my stories liek yours. But sorely, my stories are filled with the amount of darkness in my mind. Please do something more with your stories, I haven't had the leisure of reading all of them yet.

Viper Serpente

kawaii . I loved it

OMG! PLEASE UPDATE! IF YOU DO NOT UPDATE I SHALL CRY INDEED! I LOVE IT! E! lol

Eyra

OH MY GOSH! That was so beautiful! I just loved it! WoW! You...left me speechless...wow! Just beautiful!

Smoochies and Huggies!

KIT

WoW! great story! Loved it. Yes it was a bit graphic, but it flowed together well. The end was great! Keep up the great wrtitng.

great story, write more HieiKeiko!