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| epalladino 2006-03-22 ch 1, | abuseSuch a wonderful, warm story. My grandmother used to bake homemade bread and I could just smell it while I was reading your description. Thank you for a wonderful sequel to an interesting episode. Beth Palladino |
| RevSue 2004-05-07 ch 3, | abuseThank you for this story -- I thoroughly enjoyed it! I'm glad Martha and Ed are happily married now, too, as well as Carolyn and the Captain! Susan |
| CottageGhost 2004-03-27 ch 1, | abuseI truly enjoyed this! The idea of the link between Carolyn and the Captain by way of the ring is really quite interesting and very well rendered. I especially enjoyed that last section about the making of the loaf of bread; it was a wonderful way to show Daniel's support of Carolyn in all her endeavors, as well as the love and sharing that such a relationship should ideally foster. A thoroughly enjoyable read -- I do hope we'll see more from you soon :-) Thanks for sharing! Chantal |
| barbell 2004-03-17 ch 3, | abuseWhat a sweet story. With a confusing relationship such as Carolyn and the Captain had, you would expect their married life to also be confusing! But it was warm and wonderful. Such a joy to see each of them changing to please the other. Thank you so much for giving us this fun story. |
| Helena Russel 2004-03-03 ch 3, | abuseThanks for this great sequel to the ep 'Wedding Day'. I enjoyed the reading very much. Anne |