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| Ms Western Ink 2006-08-07 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful perspective. It is a line of thought I do not recall having read before and certainly never thought of myself. |
| Misao Mei Mei 2005-06-13 ch 1, | abusewah! what a great Aoshi fic. I'm revamping my Aoshi, Misao, and AoshixMisao fanfiction archive and was wondering if could add a few of your fics to it. Glaze, And This is How You Remind Me, Eighteen Times Nine, Our Aoshis, and of course this one (Clarity). let me know, will you? I'd love to add your fics to the archive. my email is misaomeimei[at]gmail[dot]com (since has that nasty habit of deleting urls and such) |
| Ashfae 2004-05-23 ch 1, | abuseYay, a mature/intriguing glimpse into Aoshi's head! This was a great change from the usual angst-ridden schlock that's written about him. BTW, thanks for your review of "Rehearsal". Much appreciated. =) |
| petite-shee 2004-04-12 ch 1, | abuseI always like your writing so far. Maybe because there's always Aoshi and Misao I could find in, or maybe because your stories are kinda which still leave remnant in my head even after I get over with it, or maybe because they're good too read, nice to spell its aloud, or maybe... dunno. Maybe because I think YOU just like writing. Maybe because Aoshi is not the only one who fond of 'the rise and the dip of syllable'... and,oh yeah, I meant it about spelling the stories aloud n_n |
| Starhopper 2004-03-07 ch 1, | abuseYou created such a zen-like atmosphere, almost like a mantra, "He drinks his tea and looks at her and says nothing". Such a powerful concept to bridge the waves too, is he sane or insane? How can one tell? It's in the eye of the beholder and for Aoshi it is best that those eyes remain focused on reality, Tea and Misao. I loved it, it was inspiring and now I'm in a good place to study some History for my final. (I LOVED it if you couldn't tell) Starhopper |
| ChiisaiKo 2004-03-04 ch 1, | abuseHey Saucie. What a refreshing read. I liked how you didn't have to introduce the setting yet I can visualize the environment. I also liked how you ended this. There's a sense of peace in there, which is very nice. :) Good job. I see that you're a fan of Aoshi. hehe. |
| Kitsune-Onna19 2004-03-04 ch 1, | abusethis was very good, and very well written. you should really continue this, like in other people's POVs. i like this a lot. and realise is spelled realize. and, can u pls. R&R some of my fics? =) |
| narakunohime 2004-03-04 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. Continue? |
| Shimizu Hitomi 2004-03-03 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. Especially the last line. (Now I feel bad because I cannot write reviews. At. All. :-P) But seriously. It's very good. Kind of sad, to think that he'll never really have the sort of peace Kenshin gets (does he even want to?), yet it maintains a rather detached tone -- the random inserts of "But he looks at her..." add to the effect. (madness = sanity?) ^_~ |
| Wistful-Eyes 2004-03-03 ch 1, | abuse*sigh* That was great. Full of stuff. Really interesting perspective from Aoshi. ^^ Keep writing! |
| saoki 2004-03-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseAn excellent look inside Aoshi ^-^" A good view of the human mind, and how complicated a tortured soul could be... Overall... it's a good story. I assume this is one shot. Or is there goind to be more?... anyway, keep up the good writing! n_n |