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| nfcghghj 2004-03-04 ch 1, anon. | abusethis sucked ** so much that crap came out! |
| Arrow-Tipped Kestrel 2004-03-04 ch 1, | abuseThis is so touching! one of my most favorite poems! |
| Green Monkey Spankers 2004-03-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseFirst of all, Boromir was NOT the poet--that was Faramir. So, unless Faramir wrote this for himself from Boromir (if that even makes sense), this could not be possible in anyway. Secondly, Boromir's dead. Think about it. I REALLY don't think dead people write poems, do you? Thank you. |
| NightbirdSongbird 2004-03-04 ch 1, | abuseThe last line... it hurt. >_< Sorry, that's just the way I feel. But the rest of it was fine. Keep trying, this was pretty good, you just need to work on the way you say things. |
| Arien Elanor 2004-03-04 ch 1, | abuseThat is a cute poem. I liked it! |