Reviews for A First Year for the Charmed Ones

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Lolchen 2008-01-16 ch 4,	abuseHi! I think someone might already told you these but I just thought "then I do it, too": - Tonks last name is Tonks. Nymphadora Tonks, so please, erase the "Belcan"-thingie! - I don't think Piper would allow them to call her by her first name. She's nice, yes, but they should call her "Professor Halliwell" because she's stern. - Lucius Malfoy wasn't the same year as Severus Snape and the Marauders. About Tonks I don't know. - No one would call Dumbledore "Professor D" because it's disrespecting the Great Sorcerer. - In seven year, James Potter and Lily Evans had been Head Boy and Head Girl. I don't know if there are prefects too but there are only ONE Head Boy and Girl. - I don't think they would cause this kind of ruckus in the lessons and secondly I don't think Piper would allow it to go this far. - I don't think Professor Dumbledore would come to Piper to talk whilst she's giving lessons if it isn't important. He would sent someone, perhaps. What did he want, anyway? That's all I can think of the moment. I'd liked you to revise it again, but I will read on if you write more ^^! mfG Lolchen
WillowFae 2007-04-08 ch 4,	abuseupdate soon! :)
Paradisa 2007-01-01 ch 4,	abuseI really like it! Maybe this is not the typical James, but I can life with that... Would be cool, if you go on
The Eromancer 2006-10-22 ch 1,	abuseya know for a change how about instead of always having Harry and his group of teenagers meating up witht eh second generation of Halliwells and goign threw all HIS adventures, ya change it up a bit, eh? Ya know like sometime AFTER Harry gets done with the whole Voldemort Issue and he just wants to get away so he moves to America and loo and behold... ends up moving in next to the Halliwells! I'm sure you could potentialy sneek him into ANY of the seasons and put him into any of the pairings. Just change up a few things here and there to fit how he does magic in with the Charmed series and wala! instant perfect storyline. WHY CAN'T PEOPLE THINK TO DO THIS?!?!?!?! I'M TIRED OF SEEING THE SECOND OR CURRENT GENERATION GOING TO HOGWARTS... IT'S!! BORING!! AND "OVERUSED"!
Sarah Lila F 2006-02-19 ch 1,	abuse“How make I help you girls?” Correction: "How may I help you girls?"
Lana 2005-04-25 ch 4, anon.	abuseVery good so far. i was really gettin into it. it isnt a bad crossover like most. tis really belivevable please write more
miraculous-disaster-91 2004-11-08 ch 4,	abuseNice chappie and story, update soon. P.S: you haven't updated for like, 2 months. What's up with that? I know you're busy but does 30 minutes of writing kill you? Leogal
PrudencePiperHalliwell 2004-10-15 ch 4,	abuseHi. Great idea for a story. just one problem, teachers don't get sorted into houses. only students do. thats why i was confused at the beginning thinking they were kids and adults. and why the hell is cole turner in this story? that bastard should be in HELL! lol. im not a really big cole fan. also wheres Leo?
UK All The Way 2004-10-10 ch 4,	abuseTonk's last name is Tonks. Nymphadora (sp) Tonks. Recall when Remus said and this is Nympahdora Tonks who prefers to be called by her surname. Well written. I think Proffessor Binns is Binn"s" not Binn. It wa the perfect legnth. I like how you've started to show a bit more of The Maruader's personalities in this chapeter. I am very excited to see how this will progress so keep writing. Good Luck!
CharmedP5 2004-09-30 ch 4,	abuseUm.. lets see...you asked what's tonks' last name, wel, i pretty sure it's Tonks. and that chapter wasn't that long. if you have any detail questions and you don't feel like looking them up then you could ask me. okay? keep writing
UK All The Way 2004-09-24 ch 3,	abuseWell done. You switched things around abit though. Didn't you already make Piper head of Slytherin? Eh, I might be wrong. Haven't been online in a long time. Keep up the good work. I like this story very much is hooked ~UK
CharmedP5 2004-09-20 ch 3,	abusethat was a uneventful chapter but that doesn't means it's boring. but if it was you gotta face it, every story has a boring part if it doesn't then it's kinda corny. anyways please right more.
CharmedP5 2004-09-20 ch 2,	abusei like this story. umm but in book five it says james never got a badge just lupin got a badge. he said dumbldore thought he could keep james and sirius in line(but that didn't work). anyways i really like this story and so i'm gonna stop writing and read chpter 3.
me52080 2004-09-19 ch 3,	abuseWonderful chapter. I can't wait to read more. I just love Charmed/HP x-over's. Please don't take to long to update.
hermoine21 2004-09-19 ch 2,	abuseGreat story. Love the Charmed/ HP cross. Please update as soon as u can

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