Woa. Ok, quite different to what I wrote. But very good none the less =)

Ari chan

Hah. I had an idea like this. Started writing it too. Lol. Great job =)

ARi chan

thank you so much for not sending Kenshin away. I seriously thought that you were going to, but I couldn't bring myself to stop reading. So thank you, for letting Kenshin stay.

aww its good! love it

Short and Sweet. Good job, there were some gramatical errors and such, but nothing to big. You did a decent job with developing the beginning, but didn't really carry through it throughout the story. You should have also put something in between the sections to show the change of scene or subject, it gets confusing when your reading something, and all of a sudden it changes. Hope these help, I only mean as constructive critism. Good idea though, definately recognized the river scene from Jin-e but liked the way you changed it.

Terrific! *Applause*

*squeals* that was really really good! AH! lol...anyway. that was a great ending.

Short and sweet...a little too short if you ask me but I enjoyed it very much. Keep up the good work!

Gasp! No way! An update! I am pleasantly surprised :-) I gotta say, I had chalked this one up to one of the many permanently unfinished fics on my favs list. Chocolate to you!

i loved it very much !!
it was really sweet the way Kenshin was so protective over Kaoru...and your story was really touching.. great job !! this story is gonna be on my favourite stories list ...hehehe

-froggi3

aw! very cute i liked it a lot!

its cute

Ok, I had to look back at this story to make sure I had read all the chapters and I missed one. You ended the story very well. I really liked it! ^-^

OH! Awsome story. I really like it. Update soon!

pls update soon.. i can't wait for the next chapters... )