Oh, that is great. I love the contrast between the two and the realness of the dialogue.
I'm not normally a fan of navy boys slash, but that moment at the end was hilarious. Poor Gillette!

Brilliant. *Giggles* Very well written. There's a lot of potential with Gillette and Norrington's men in general that isn't often explored. You captured emotions and thoughts really well without seeming to try. ;) Adore it!

what does discompose mean?

Awesome!

nice - I liked the ending

Wickedly cheeky! Well done:)