cool story

Very cute story, great job!

Good story. I liked it. A couple things I thought I should point out to you: I've read that Wally's parents are dead, that is why he spends so much time at the orphanage at Central City. I could be wrong about that, but I've read a lot about them being deceased. Also, Wally's hair is red, not blonde. Just a few things I thought I'd point out. :) Great job, however, so keep it up!

i loved this story it was great! i just wish it was a little longer. any ways keep up the good work

This is cool. You really went beyond the personalities of the characters that the cartoon gives us. Great development. Awesome one-shot.

~blinks~ cranberry sauce? Thanks-giving? Umm, okay, sure then. I mean, sure I know wot they are, they talk about that stuff every now and then on american tv shows... hm. Anyway, u had a couple/few sp mistakes, "peel" u had rite the 1st time, but then u went & changed it 2 "peal" as in 'a peal of laughter' for example. Y'know, this fic reminds me of another from a ways back, where the JL gang was talking about where they went on holidays and how they passed the time relaxing when they were little. It's the same kinda vibe y'know, with the nostalgia and the warm fuzzies and the commeraderie and u just come away feeling happy and tingly inside... yeh, this was a nice one.

Oh that was great! I loved that! Great great work!

Loved it. so sweet.

Good story, everybody was in character and everything.
BTW, Wally West is a redhead. Just thought you might like to know.