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| BlueyChan 2004-07-29 ch 5, | abuseIt's good. I'm confused, but it's good...I'm always confused. ^_^ hope to see more. |
| dramatiks 2004-07-29 ch 5, | abuse^_^ nice story, very intriguing. can't wait to see what happens next! |
| javelinconquest 2004-07-29 ch 4, | abuse*blinks with wide eyes* Um...wow. This mustv'e took careful planning because it turned out really well. And all this time I thought Jeremy was the bad one...too bad it didn't really happen, that would be awesome. You know what, it seems like the ones who do believe in the fairy tales never get to experience ones, but the ones that don't are sooner or later introduced to one that is real, just to rib it in their face. Anyways, I added this to my favorites. Very nice. |
| b00ks mom 2004-03-17 ch 3, anon. | abuseYou have a very good concept going here. Like the idea of Jareth being a bad guy. Keep up the good work. |
| applekrisp14 2004-03-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseOh, this is a lovely, lovely story! You have to add more! Lucky for me, I might not have school tomorrow so I might be able to actually finish another chapter for one of my stories. I haven't updated...for a long while. Please don't be like me. Update soon. Not 3 months after the first chapter. -ak14 |
| b00ks mom 2004-03-10 ch 2, anon. | abusewow. neat story so far. will keep checking in on it. |
| MollyTheWanderer 2004-03-09 ch 2, | abuseWell. That's pretty good. I was taken off guard with Jeremy, but I like the twist. Please keep writing, and update soon too. ^_^. Bye. |
| Moonlight Goddess 2004-03-08 ch 2, | abuseLOL! Yes I did. I just got this image of Demetry (sp?) Plus I LOVE Anastasia! |
| Arcana Dagger 2004-03-08 ch 2, | abuseMORE! WRITE MORE! |
| applekrisp14 2004-03-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseOh, I love this story! It's not like any other I've read! Be original! Write like Moonlight Goddess! Taadaa! Update soon, please! Cheers and tally ho! -applekrisp14 P.S. Did you get the line "What? Were you a vulture in a past life?" from the movie Anastacia? (Sorry for the sp.) If not, that's odd... lol |
| Moonlightgoddess 2004-03-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's me Moonlight. Yes Jareth looks like David from the movie. His brother is slightly different which will be noted in the next chapter that I am working on now. |
| San 2004-03-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseO! Looks like someone is in trouble. But I have a question. Does Jareth/Jeremy look like how David Bowie does in the movie? Or do they look different from each other? o.o? |
| Moonlight Goddess 2004-03-06 ch 1, | abuseWow! I actually got a review! A good one at that! I guess it didn't suck as bad as I thought it did! Thanks! My muse is on holiday, but I will get the next part up asap. |
| Oddity Incarnate 2004-03-06 ch 1, | abuseHey! Nice twist. Keep it up. |