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| Krystal Kerro Sky 2004-03-10 ch 1,  | abuseHey! I know there is some time stamp problems, but the trick is to not read the time stamps... and about the 8 minutes between postings.. that is because while doing that we also were working on many other things, like email, and stuff. And we like to take our time with thinkng through our posts. I know during one point in time i was talking to my dad... and that took a few minutes. Thank you all so much for the reveiws! ~Kerro |
| Hugh.Azrael.com 2004-03-09 ch 1, | abusehey man i like the format... it makes it easy to read, it marks out who is who well unlike some with so much dialog that you dont know whose talking and who isnt, i think it works well. i must say that if you are going to do it like that put realistic time gaps in, its not very often when people wait 8 mins to reply to a question but it was happening a lot here. |
| silverarm 2004-03-08 ch 1, | abuseHm... a real-time RPG, huh? Nice concept. I think this is pretty well-written for something that was created seemingly spur-of-the-moment. It might be fun for you to do a little bit of editing and convert this to real story format. Just a thought. The time notes at the side can be a bit distracting from the dialogue and action. |
| SuperNova 2004-03-05 ch 1, | abusecool. you posted this. Yay. |