Huh. More intriguing, as well as being a bit harder to follow. I love parallel tangents; seeing how things would have been so different if this or that happened.

Okay this must be said. You rock. You have this amazing writing style and you actually mention things that occur in the show. I say this since I am sick of the shows writers never mentioning things like Sydney's little bottle ova again. While the Cities arc will always be my favorite I enjoy every piece you have written.

so good!