It wasnt what I expected but I kinda liked it! Will there be anymore? Hope so :D

Wow ... that was just ... cute!

Uncreative mood? Whoa, then your other works must be awesome. I really liked this ficlet. The mood was great and the whole thing about being a teenager was nicely done. Great stuff!

This is great! For such a short story, it sure as heck is good! Your descriptions are awesome and the story is very original! I mean, everyone has thought of Lily and Sirius datine and everyone has thought of Sirius being gay, but who has really thought of a combo of both? Just you! Lol!
Hugz,
Lindsey

This is what you write during an uncreative mood? I'm very impressed. Very, very impressed. But it's very, very good. You said yourself that it's a bit disjointed, but in a stylistic way that only adds to the ficlet. Overall, I think you did an excellent job.

great job. it captures the mood of...i dunno...teenageness very well.