|Reviews for Storyteller: Revised|
| DemiSpy 5/14/13 . chapter 17
I can't believe the amount of reviews this story has. This story is brilliant, and deserves many more! Amazing job. You had a concrete idea and you laid it out for us to enjoy wonderfully. You have a gift, and I'm happy to see how well you put it to use. Keep writing!
| Doktor Nauk 3/19/13 . chapter 17
All I can say is headcanon accepted. Just wow...
| komaeda 1/29/13 . chapter 17
aaaa what a cute story wow i was realyl scared that wendy would die but you came up with a clever way to save her! yeah
| julie 1/1/13 . chapter 17
damn, it is fantastic. I spent 4 hours at night reading it. congratulations. I love the story!
| swirly'girly 4/16/12 . chapter 1
Your writing style is lovely and suits Peter Pan stories so well!
I'm intruiged by this first chapter and eagar to get into the rest of the story!
Great job :D
| Rocket-Furie 12/15/11 . chapter 17
Beautiful! You are a VERY good author. I know I could never do that good.
| rileybear 14 11/1/11 . chapter 17
Absolutely amazing. I loved it. Thank you.
| GhibliGirl91 10/28/11 . chapter 17
I went and read this on a day when I was missing childhood. It was so beautiful that I got a little teary, and even jealous of Wendy Moira Angela Darling. I wonder if you're surprised to get a review for a fic that is nearly 9 years old, but I doubt it would make a difference to my mind if it was a hundred. I want to live in Neverland.
| Sachita 10/19/11 . chapter 17
Such a beautiful story! Thank you for brightening my day up :)
| shaid 8/1/11 . chapter 17
That was very interesting; I really enjoyed it!
Thank you for sharing and good luck with more!
| AllWeNeedIsSomeIceCreamAndAHug 5/6/11 . chapter 17
I read the draft first, and since the draft was so amazing, I poured my heart into that review. but then I read this version. This. Is. A. Bloody. Amazing. Wonderful. Masterpiece! You are truly a writer! Everything I wrote in the original comment in your draft shall be multiplied by infinity to tell you how much I love this story. You're amazing :)
| Lucy's Echos 5/15/10 . chapter 17
Oh this was wonderful, I simply love it! It was well written and thoughtful it was on the best stories I've read in a long time.
| CheeseVampire 4/24/10 . chapter 17
| QueenCleopatra 1/28/09 . chapter 17
I cannot possibly express my delight in reading this story. It was beautifully and well written. I must say that I admire your imagination, and the way you carefully sculpted your characters. I did not read the first draft of this story, but knowing that the end chapters-my favourites- were almost unchanged demonstrates your skill in the art of writing. You, just like the Wendy you created, are a true Storyteller.
| Anise Nalci 12/12/08 . chapter 17
I did enjoy this... It was a very sweet, unique twist in the Peter Pan story...