that was short, but ^_^ nonetheless it was soo cool! ahh Garland has arrived!
I can't wait to read more of this, the plot is thickening ne? ^_^ me off to watch spirited away! update soon,
Ja ne
~dudems

lol, you won't hurt max too much??
great chapter
please update soon

I Garland-kun! *glomps Garland* He's so awsome! I especially liked the ending scene where they start to chatter and Ty says Brooklyn to go himself. Awsome, awsome! Although I don't see Brooklyn go around swearing like that. Good job! Update!
Ja ne!

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I want more!
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wohoo, I like it! ^^ It's kinda short, but I shouldn't complain, all my friends complain that my chapters are too short and it annoys the hell outta me! ><
Anyway, great story! Update soon, k?
~TormentedKiss

Hello!
I really like how you made Hillary!
Whats going to happen to Kai?
Wht does Tala need a knife?
Um...is Tala going to kill Max?
Good chapter!
Update soon

YAYZ COOKIES!
*eats like Tyson*
So Ozumas evil
PLEASE UPDATE!
Poor Kai.
Hilary was always evil. I have nothing to say. Its too good...

oh i wonder what's going to happen!
you have to update this soon, and yay you updated really fast this time
*gives marshmellows and v-coke*
~dudems

*munches on the cookies* yummie! Anyway... No they're after Max! *cries* Don't hurt Max too bad okay? Okay? Besides that, wonderful chap, I can't wait to see more soon.
Tootles!

WHISPER! *glomp* Great story buddy! So, you've decided to make it a full story then. You still leaving the flashback out? *crosses fingers and hopes you dont*
I cant wait for it to continiu! *glomps Robbert, Rei and Kai* Mine ^_^

wow. Three words:
You have talent. that is such a good...flow to it and it's so angsty in a good way. Update! I really want to know what's gonna happen.

WHAT THE HECK DID YOU DO TO KAI?
YOU made kai look like an idiot...
but other then that good chapter...
pleaze update soon

woah. poor Kai. hope he's oaky. anyway that was cool.

that was a REALLY good first chapter plz update soon i want to know what happends

*claps* ^_^ awsome girl! Can't wait to see more!