Excellent, Quality, Brill.

Is this the basis for that script?

good. I'd love to give a-what is it? Ah, a well rounded critique, but im tired. night

Ha Ha Ha ! Hee Hee Hee! Oh HE HE He! Please carry on, I beg you ! Ha Ha HA!

XD XD XD XD
Wonderful with the synonym thingys. XD

Ellie,
Brilliant, just brilliant. I'm enjoying this more almost all the other fanfiction I've read.
Good use of your plot holes, and Gregory (Gollum)is a great twist.
Thanks for not writing a 10th Member fiction. Those are the worst.
Signed,
BlueMarten

Oh this is really funny! Plot holes! Village of Cheddar! Mwa ha ha! Keep it up!

very creative. i love the backpack finish / bag end thing