Really well done!! Didn't see that coming!! Excellent!!

Excellent chapter actually! Well written. I can actually see Webb doing that under the circumstances.

Lady Chal -- if you're still writing -- this cries out for an epilogue.

great story.

this is really interesting! I cannot wait for you to post more of it!

Wow. You're off to a great start. I hope Harm and Mac are strong enough to weather this complication to their relationship. And just what is their relationship - are they just friends,lovers or what? Why is Harm with Mac and why is he the one signing commitment papers?

As much as I don't like Webb with Mac, still glad they didn't kill him off! This is a very frightening version! Poor Mac. Poor Harm, too.

What is with everyone? You guys all wish for Harm and Mac to be together but, does ANYONE remember what happened to Moonlighting? Let's see, after the two main characters "got" together, it ruined the show, it ruined their ratings, and it basically was their downfall. So, for you all who want H/M to "get" together, be careful what you wish for. By the way, it's against military regulations for them to be involved, so, one of them would have to leave and THAT would ruin the show.

Hi
I have already reviewed this on WMF (air_hair_lair) but since its soo good Im a gonna do it again.
I love this fic, your an excellent author...hell you could probably write about paint drying and make it sound incredibly intresting. What Im trying to say is you have true talent.

I'm not a Webb/Mac shipper, but the way you write them makes me want to reconsider. How wrenching -- no one comes out of this situation on top.

You're off to a great start. The first chapter made me physically sick, but you killing Webb fixed that. Thank god Mac having his baby was just a delusion. I feel so sorry for Harm, seeing someone you love go through hell is awful. I wouldn't wish it on anyone. Except Webb.