 Lightspeed-4 2006-07-19 . chapter 10Awesome! And it's not Skull Caverns, it's Skull Cavern. I'm pretty sure with that! Great Work! ~GeorgiaRain |
 Feline Feral 2004-09-02 . chapter 10Can't wait for the sequal. This one was awesome. I luved it. |
 Sergeant Scarlett 2004-08-24 . chapter 9what can i say about your story?
it was bloody fantasic!! an excellent read! carter/dana and chad/kelsey forever!
what can i say about you??
you are an extreemly talentled writer!! great job!
update soon plz!
miz~g |
 Feline Feral 2004-08-23 . chapter 9Don't they know nothing is ever that easy in their world? Looking forward to next chapter and the sequal if you do one. Keep up the awesome work.
Catch ya on the flip side, Rosalie |
 BlueGirl90 2004-08-23 . chapter 9awesome
put more dana/carter in the next chapter |
 Feline Feral 2004-06-14 . chapter 8Great chapter. Keep up the awesome work. Can't wait for more. I can't believe they all fell for that so easily, geez. :) |
 Skyd-Maddick6706 2004-05-22 . chapter 7Omg, I cannot believe she actually told off Dana! So what's gonna happen? Ooh, I love how everything is so unpredictable in this story. Update soon! |
 Feline Feral 2004-05-20 . chapter 7Great chapter. I was wondering what happened to you. Can't wait for more. Keep up the great work. :) |
 Dana Grayson 2004-03-29 . chapter 6My hero, I love the D/C and K/C. I also like the dialogue. I can't wait to see how Chad reacts to Kelsey’s admission. Hope you update soon. |
 Skyd-Maddick6706 2004-03-29 . chapter 6omg, Kelsey ran away! What was Chad gonna say 2 her? Update soon! I gotta know! |
 Ms. Birdman 2004-03-28 . chapter 6 Aww! poor kelsey, whats gonna happen next? post new chapter really really soon. pretty please |
 Feline Feral 2004-03-28 . chapter 6Great chapter. Can't wait for more. Keep up the great work. :) |
 Feline Feral 2004-03-14 . chapter 5Great chapter. Poor Carter. Keep up the great work. :) |
 Skyd-Maddick6706 2004-03-14 . chapter 5So what's gonna happen? Is Carter gonna be ok? PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I gotta know what's gonna happen! |
 Ms. Birdman 2004-03-13 . chapter 5 Oh yeah! totally forgot about the nurse! what did she do to him?! update soon please! |